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By : kristashadow
  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    I love it so much! please update soon
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  • From ANON - vibora on November 30, 2006
    oooo! *squeals* i luuuuv dom!draco n sub!harry! update soon! it's pretty good! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Lissa on November 30, 2006
    Please don't leave me with cliffies... they make me sad. :-(
    Update por favor.
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  • From ANON - SugoiNoVenom on November 30, 2006
    More, please!
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  • From ANON - Alicia on November 30, 2006
    Ahhh! A cliffy! I think your just doing this to torment your readers, lol. But then again, what writer doesn't like to torment their readers every now and then? You've left me hanging again, it's so unfair. I'm overflowing with excitement for the next chapter. Don't keep me waiting too long, please!!!

    As to your question, a beta is someone who looks over your work before you post to make sure there are no mistakes. They correct any spelling, punctuation, and grammar errors. They also (if you want them to) will give you advice on how to make your story better. Basically, they read it over and make sure it's easy to read and understand for the reader. A pre-reviewer of sorts.

    It makes posts a little slower but in the long run it's worth it. While you may find no errors when you read it, your beta could find things you had no idea you had missed.

    If you decide to find one you can post a request on the main HP page under "Beta's" or you can post on the main forums. And should you find no one you want to take on, I'd be happy to help you out. I know two beta's who would love to take another writer on or I personally can work with you. Just say the word!

    Ok, enough if my rambling, lol. Update soon!!!!




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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2006
    poor harry...it's creepy how draco stalks him but I can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Sakya on November 30, 2006
    Gosh, you really have to work on your chapters... they are way too short. You are just getting in the mood and bam! chapter is over. Not nice.

    Doing great by the way.

    Please up date soon.
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  • From ANON - mphoenix on November 30, 2006
    you can not update every day or twice a day, give us a cliffie, and then take longer. that is just mean!! update again soon.
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  • From ANON - wizli on November 30, 2006
    And here you got my third review!. It doesn't take me more than a minute and it makes you happy, and a happy author writes more and faster! *grins cheekily*. I never thought Hermione could be so shameless, maybe she only had to discover the "pleasures of the flesh"? :P. Who can be that stranger in Harry's bed, I wonder... ^_- I want more of that forceful!Draco, I'm sure Harry is gonna enjoy it too! (the lucky sod).
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  • From ANON - strawberry_buttercup on November 30, 2006
    no draco? ohh wells. next chapter? the chapter was longer, so thankyou!
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  • From ANON - mphoenix on November 30, 2006
    okay if the next one isn't longer i'm going to scream. and i mean scream. loud and long and really annoying.
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  • From ANON - dar on November 30, 2006
    Wow Draco sound so.....morbid.....hrm i like!!!PLease update soon!!! I hope Harry doesn't get too much pain!!! I like a submissive HArry but.....not too submissive a little fight is always fun to read.
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  • From ANON - Alicia on November 29, 2006
    Oh my, you've updated twice without my knowing. That really doesn't happen often with stories I like. Sooo, to take the blame off myself (Lord knows I hate being the faulty one) I'll just tell myself that your a fast writter. LOL, it works, you see, because my conscience is satisfied for the lack of review for chapter two AND it satifies me to know that I'll be able to read new posts for your story often.

    ;P

    Seriously though, great chapters. Draco's viciousness as left me in a swirling trap and I'm on the edge of my seat. I can't wait for the next update!

    Though, you should really look into finding yourself a beta. I don't mean to affend you, I swear! It's just a small bit of advice. Beta's are life-savers, lol.

    Anyway, update soon please!!!
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  • From ANON - Princess Bob on November 29, 2006
    excellent.....it was great.....can't wait for more
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  • From ANON - amyordinary on November 29, 2006
    thanks for the chapter... honestly, as long as harry and draco both end up alive and happy, what else matters?
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