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Reviews for Pretty Prey

By : kristashadow
  • From SlashySnitch on December 26, 2006
    LOVED IT! Great job, again! Grammar wasn't actually too bad (maybe I'm reading the edited version...). Well, I hope that this review put a smile on your face, since you love reviews!!!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - ucgurl001 on December 25, 2006
    I just wanted to say that I really like this story. Harry's so cute and sweet, and I love Draco as a dom cause I just have problems seeing him as anything else(although I have read some good stories where they take turns). Well anyway, I love the story and keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kireania on December 25, 2006
    Clues what clues??? I am really dense in that department srry. Oh well as usual i can't wait to read more. and i love the fact that they are getting along now. have fun writing more. at least as much as i will ha ve reading it.

    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From ANON - Kireania on December 25, 2006
    Clues what clues??? I am really dense in that department srry. Oh well as usual i can't wait to read more. and i love the fact that they are getting along now. have fun writing more. at least as much as i will ha ve reading it.

    Ja ne
    Kireania
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  • From ANON - Z on December 25, 2006
    you're awfully expecting a lot. reviews are gifts from readers, not something that they have to give. i hate authors that tell us that they arent going to write if we dont review. your writings not even that great, so your arrogance is not needed. i wouldnt say your writing is awful but its nothing spectacular. the plot isnt something overly exciting either. it aint nothin new, so stop demanding reviews from us. there are a few mistakes here and there. a lot of run on sentences but nothing overly annoying. it could also do with more detail. anyway, its nothing great but its alright, seeing that its your first story. perhaps you should get a beta.
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  • From ANON - Cortney on December 25, 2006
    I love where the story is going keep it up and please expose who is the unknown person in Harry's vision soon.
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  • From GreenEyedCat on December 25, 2006
    Okay that chapter didn't solved anything but it was sweet :-)
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  • From RavenWhite on December 24, 2006
    i was sitting here, trying to decide what to write for the review. usually i give some sort of critism, but for this story i honestly cant think of anything. i do have a suggestion. instead of making readers scroll through your review replies, write them at the bottom. and i have a guess: dumbledor is making the mind controling potion and is funding ron for some reason or another. BTW, i love Eight, seriously, if I ever get a snake, that's what I'm naming him
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  • From ANON - ochibi-chwan on December 24, 2006
    oooo, kute chapter!!
    MERRY CHRISTMAS!!! Aww, while the rest of us are freezing to death, you get to enjoy the warm sun!
    can't wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - nightsummer on December 24, 2006
    omg!!!!! that is sooo good i cant wait to read more! i love the way you write!
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  • From ANON - Sorceress on December 24, 2006
    Brill story still- update as soon as you can after christmas!!
    Merry Christmas and happy new year!
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  • From ANON - maria joao on December 24, 2006
    loooovvvvveed itt...please update soon...give me a christmas present..pleaseeeeee
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  • From ANON - SuicidalBunni on December 24, 2006
    *glares* well lucky you, with ur sun and beaches and pools. and what do we in bloody england get? rain and fog and no snow!! *sobs* but hey, going to scotland, so i mgiht catch snow! Cant' wait!! i'm gonna be cold. anyways, love love love it!! pleaaaassseeee update!!
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  • From ANON - Yana on December 24, 2006
    its proberly so Ron and Hermione can hav sex in peace
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 24, 2006
    good chapter, I like it
    MERRY CHRISTMAS AND A HAPPY NEW YEAR!!!
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