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Reviews for The Truth about Us

By : namilie
  • From Wistfu1Stargazer on September 12, 2007
    RE: Chapter 3
    Great suspense factor going on at the end there. =D

    Do you have a beta at all? Just curious because I noticed some grammatical and spelling errors that could have gotten caught. I not trying to be mean, just thought that you might like to know because the errors tend to confuse and/or become distracting and interrupt the flow/pace of the story.

    Other than that keep on writing and we'll keep on reading! ;-D
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  • From ANON - magical heather on December 17, 2006
    Defiently like it coming from both sides cant wait to see what happened to hermione
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 07, 2006
    yikes!!!! you NEED paragraphs
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  • From ANON - allie on December 04, 2006
    please updat!
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  • From ANON - ozarkmoon on December 04, 2006
    Instead of 'staid' I think you mean "stayed" as in to stay in place, past tense.
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  • From ANON - allie on December 03, 2006
    please update
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 03, 2006
    holy cow, that was kinda a cliffy there. i totally didnt expect that and i want more. that was really really really good. i hope you update soon. and make the chapters longer.
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  • From LaBibliographe on November 29, 2006
    This is a very intriguing start to your tale. You've offered up a few details to give us a picture of the trio's current circumstances and set the stage for more chapters. You can unfold the story slowly, bringing the reader along with a full account. Don't worry about how long it is if the story needs the background, as long as the background is pertinent. I liked the peek at the trio in their later years. Unusual!

    And thank you for the mention of my previous review. (Don't forget to read over your work a few times before uploading it. That always pays dividends.) 8-)
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  • From ANON - skye on November 29, 2006
    good start, a proper (accurate) history of the trio from their point of view with out all the..ah.. embelishments of time and writers. I look forward to reading more!
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