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Reviews for Damsel in distress.

By : Leenah
  • From ANON - Devon on December 01, 2006
    Nice! got me a little horny... Next time i need a shag! please!
    Oh, Bottom!Draco rulz!
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  • From ANON - Plicit whims on December 01, 2006
    i loved bnoth stories. i think for another sequal, you could descibe Harry"s coming out to either everyone, or just Ron and Hermione.
    but other wise its very good.
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  • From Vittani on December 01, 2006
    No i thought it was the perfect sequel. I would definitely love another part. Maybe half their date at Hogsmeade, everyone finding out and where their relationship goes in the future. If you could do that, that would be perfect.
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  • From ANON - DBZVelena on December 01, 2006
    Don't we all love stuff so fluffy and sweet as this stuff.
    Barely any plot, just fluff!
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  • From ANON - drippy123 on December 01, 2006
    You really need to format this, with one space between paragraphs, and even breaking up some of those huge blocks of text so that they are more readable. You also want to stop using "cause" instead of "because"; look them up, they do not mean the same thing. You should also stop using "gonna" instead of "going to"; you want to use the correct term to convey your meaning.
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  • From ANON - stef on December 01, 2006
    oh wow! i totally loved that! brilliant although some minor editing could be done, ie, no colloquialisms like 'gonna' and 'cause'... they slightly ruin the effect although pretty good nevertheless!
    Hmm... a sequel eh? I like the sound of that! How about showing the actual date, maybe showing what the payback for Marcus Flint is and maybe even Ron and Hermione's reactions? That would probably sum everything up nicely! I love your dominateable!Draco and hero!Harry! Well done and please update again soon
    Stef
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 01, 2006
    Oh that's wonderful! Will Ron and Hermione support Harry's choice of boyfriend? Can't wait for Ginny's reaction! Must have chapter 2!
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