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Reviews for The Heir

By : Tumshie
  • From BlackFalcon on October 03, 2016

    An awesome story here! I love Harry/Hermione stories, as they are my favorite pairing. Though I can also see him with other girls. ;)


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  • From hemotem on November 11, 2008
    A great read I thank you. I like what you did with the characters and find it a little funny that they didn't go and find out about the other room until it was too late =)) I thank you again for a great read.


    Hemotem
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From KDarkmoon on March 16, 2007
    Cute and very sweet.
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  • From ridert on February 07, 2007
    Excellent one of the best Harry/Hermione fics out there are you going to continue it?
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  • From ANON - Negima Fan on January 02, 2007
    This is a very interesting fic. A few things that bothered me was the speed. I know it is a one-shot, but I think this fic could have easily been made a few chappys. Another thing was the fact that the room was charmed to MAKE them have sex. I just did not like that, sorry. And the whole blood extra parent stuff annoyed me SO much but I did get over it. Finally, killing Voldemort with a gunshot to the head...... I am sorry but I am not going there. Anyway, great story, hope you can take this as a critique (sp) and not an all angle bash
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  • From ANON - mimy on December 20, 2006
    No no no not the end. What happens next? They need a house full of black-Potters.
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  • From SerenityoftheLake on December 10, 2006
    great story. is there going to be another chapter???
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  • From ANON - stella on December 02, 2006
    more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - fairyp80 on December 01, 2006
    This was a cute story. A little bit fast paced for me, but over all nicely written. Will there be more chapters? or will the first chapter be broken down to make more chapters?
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  • From ANON - JZ on December 01, 2006
    Hey, I liked your plot! It is a good story, but in my opinion you could have taken more time to let the plot unfold. You moved your story very fast forwards. I would have enjoyed more if you had focused more on the developing relationship of Harry and Hermione. You have a lot of happenings in the story but you hardly let them explain themselves. I mean, let the character to the work my adding more direct speech or so. Anyway, I don
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  • From ANON - angel on December 01, 2006
    awww that was sweet i loved it .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 01, 2006
    awww that was bitter sweet. cute. and very nice ending.
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