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Reviews for Against His Nature

By : harriet
  • From ANON - Yashida on January 06, 2007
    Your story's nice.

    However, my classic (Latin&Greek) background makes it impossible for me not to ask you one small question...

    You do realise that 'Octavia' is a girl's name, don't you?
    The male form of that name would be 'Octavius'...

    Apart from that I'd have my story beta'd for orthographic and grammar mistakes if I were you; they're not too big, but somewhat annoying while reading.

    But these are really the only remarks I have on the story.
    The writing-style in itself and the story's plot are quite good, and I really enjoy it.

    Do keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on January 06, 2007
    Can't raise my hand to either of those questions, but still loved the update. :D
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  • From ANON - Ann on January 06, 2007
    Excellent chapters. Can't wait to read how Snape lures Harry into all of this. I also love the title to chapter 20. Yeah for an excellent New Year Eve night.
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  • From ANON - Snakelette on January 06, 2007
    This is getting more and more interesting!! Love the Snape/Harry interaction and chemistry (or magic *lol*). Hermione, Draco etc. are fun too.

    Loved it! And would love more ;)
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  • From ANON - acr on January 06, 2007
    good chapter. I'm glad Ron has a new 'friend'. Hermione deserved that!
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  • From ANON - Zuka on January 06, 2007
    Yay! you updated i'm soooooooooooooooooooo happy, the chapter was awsome as usual, and can i saw this ..... I LOVE YOUR FANFICS! i know i'm wierd but i really do injoy your fanfic's. so keep up the good work and i really cant wait for an update. ^_^
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  • From ANON - ori on January 06, 2007
    oooh hot! (literally)
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  • From ANON - Dragonero on January 06, 2007
    Very good!!! I wonder how harry will react once he finds out that snape told him only a halftruth. Is snape not nervous about harry reasons to accept his proposition? He does it only out of fear to end up as snape
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  • From ANON - snapie pooh on January 06, 2007
    Snape's got a donor. Poor Harry...not! I'm so hooked to this story.

    I'm sure the Ministry isn't going to let up on finding Harry a spouse. That should certainly make for an interesting tug of war between Snape and them. My money is on the Vampire! Hey but once Snape starts sucking Harry's blood won't Lupin smell it. Can't you send him off somewhere? Send Dumbledork with him while you're at it!

    Of course we can't forget Lucius. When he finds out what Draco's done he's gonna have kittens!

    Thank you for posting ... and I know you have life besides the fan fic you write but could you write a little faster...and a little bit more.

    Sorry I know I'm pushy...but the suspense is killing me!


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  • From ANON - Anon on January 06, 2007
    ch.20-21

    love it, love it, love it!!!!!

    in fact... it's finger licking good!

    yum yum yum!!!!

    post soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on January 06, 2007
    Oh, I only wish that I got smashing drunk on New Years. We host the party though, and it is no good if the hostess can't serve. Bummer that! But these two chapter were great. Did they have to end? More soon!
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  • From ANON - laurinasta blaze on January 06, 2007
    Um, I was also wondering if Snape had been taking the potion since he was 16 (when he told Octavia he wanted to), or only intended to, but started a bit later? You also mention that he'd been taking it for 25 years? Only, that would make Sev 41, not only just turned 38. So, yeah. Confused? But still in love with your stuff. Oh, and make Harry the eager submissive again and I will personally worship you as my chosen deity. Love Lauri.
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  • From ANON - laurinasta blaze on January 05, 2007
    Once again you've written a fic good enough to keep even myself enthralled. Not many authors can hit the characters so perfectly, and despite the fact that you've gone away from your usual D/s theme, I still think this fic is captivating. Can't wait to read more- and don't forget to update! Love Lauri.
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  • From ANON - Child of the Darkened Moon on January 05, 2007
    I'm sorry, its not normally my custom to suddenly randomly review in the middle of a story. And I've only gotten through to chapter three. But those conniving-- manipulative-- ARGH! How can they keep something like that from Harry!? Its only his business- not theirs. And to try and force Ginny on him... who would want her! Well that was kinda mean, she's not so bad. But!!! This is seriously putting a damper on my never ending love for Lupin-- hopefully soon he will redeem himself. Oh it makes me nauseous thinking of it.

    Child of the Darkened Moon

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  • From ANON - Mie on January 05, 2007
    I love this story with or without smut and I know the smut will be hot when it comes. Can't wait for update

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