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Reviews for Against His Nature

By : harriet
  • From ANON - jil on December 24, 2006
    Love fics like this, very well written characters and compelling plot.


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  • From ANON - Annaku on December 23, 2006
    hey dont worry i like your story. its a good thing that you havnt put any smut in yet because then it would just be pointless. please keep it up. If you want to shut the winers up you could put in smut from the other couples.
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  • From ANON - Katie on December 22, 2006
    I love this fic, I do, but seriously what idiot is out there claiming there is TOO much smut? What smut??? I haven't seen any so far so it would be great for the smut to START (as long as it isn't Het, I mean, really). I have one request though- please, do NOT set up Draco and Hermione (or Ginny- a blond and red head- ICK). I mean, aside from the straight up fact she's a bitch and he's a hottie that is ALMOST as cliche as Draco and Harry. Almost. However, you've probably already set up the whole story arc so I can't fault you but might I say gross, gross, and uber-gross. Ok, I'm done, again love the story, and you know, just putting it out there, it isn't too late for a nice Draco-Ron. Think about it. I know I will...yumm.
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  • From ANON - snarry lover on December 22, 2006
    just wanted to mention again that i love this fic. it's heavy with plot and slowly building up to the Snarry aspect to the story. i love it. cheers!


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  • From ANON - Dragonero on December 22, 2006
    A very good story! The last chapters were great! I for one like storys with plot, so for me you do not have to change anything! I
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  • From ANON - UniGirl on December 22, 2006
    Ignore the smut-suckers RiffRaff! I love this story I jump up and down and squeee every times there is an update. My partner writes Envangelion fics and he gets the same comments in his reviews. I tell him to write what HE wants; what gives HIM satisfaction - not what his fans want. To those that have whined at RiffRaff and complained that the fic is not measuring up I say "Stiff!" It takes a LOT of courage and commitment to write fics - and extra courage to post them. Writers want contructive criticism and legitimate comments on their work, not complaints about what the fic does or doesn't have enough of! Keep up the great work RiffRaff - no you can't please everyone, but you do please thousands who read and enjoy your work.
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  • From ANON - esta on December 22, 2006
    i think this is the best Snape-vamp fic I've ever read. There's just no pleasing some people ya know? Just ignore them. It has the perfect amount of smut and plot. I'm just happy that you update regularly unlike some people here >.>
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  • From ANON - Hyde... on December 22, 2006
    NOT ENOUGH SNARRY! lol justtttttt kidding. i liked the whole bit with them.. and i wish there was more, but i shall wait until the day it happens. My body will sit in this chair staring with longing, begging you to post a new chapter with some of what I need. Until then...... type with your hearts content, fill these pages to the brim with smut, love, and such. Oh dear God. I appologize... it's rather late:).
    Cheers,
    Hyde
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  • From ANON - yiota on December 21, 2006
    If it helps, at this moment, I like the pacing of this story. Unless you start off with an established back story, you need to ease these 2 into a relationship, well if you plan to do it somewhat mildly realistically.
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  • From ANON - l'etje on December 21, 2006
    this was very very very good keep going and post soon
    bye bye
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  • From ANON - Brighttears on December 21, 2006
    It's a great story, like all your other stories you have written in the past. I like how you are developing the characters and making the story creative. Thanks for the updates to. Keep up the work!
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  • From ANON - Your Fan on December 21, 2006
    The title cracks me up.
    I loved this chapter and I hope you update soon.
    Oh, update What the Devil Wants as well. I kinda of missing the fic right now...
    Love you!
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  • From ANON - Your fan on December 21, 2006
    So, Severus is a vampire? Interesting... I never read fics like this, but you're talented enough to have caught my attention.
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  • From ANON - acr on December 21, 2006
    Go harry! Though isn't Octavia a girl's name?
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  • From ANON - Jiapa on December 21, 2006
    You had two phrases in this chapter: "lifeless, naked but still warm" and "burying his fangs into the steady pulse and sipping from his first proper meal in over a decade"

    I rather suspect that if their foodsource was lifeless, there wouldn't be a steady pulse. Perhaps, if the food source is a volunteer that will life, you might want to change lifeless to motionless, and if their food source is really dead, you might want to change steady pulse to pooling blood or something like that.

    Other than that, I'm enjoying this story very much.
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