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By : harriet
  • From BAFan on February 09, 2016
    Ch. 22

    God, what an asshole Snape is! How does he know that Harry won't retaliate by running to the Headmaster and spilling the beans?


    ~Debbie
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on February 09, 2016
    Bad bad Severus. Very bad mate for not being there when Harry woke up and tending to him afterwards. It SHOULD be HIM caring for his mate and not OCTAVIUS!!! I'd feel hurt if I were Harry.

    Well, revenge is sweet so now Snape has to wait for his turn to talk with Harry :D

    I am very glad Harry is alive, though of course, we probably all suspected that he would make it in the end. I wonder how Draco must be feeling knowing he had a part in "killing" Harry when he decided to spear old Voldie with the Gryffindor Sword. Young dragon must be plagued by guilt since he learned the truth. Or maybe they kept it from him, hmm... we don't know, not yet anyway.

    I do really like Octavia even though I would never want to be one of his mates (he has much too many of those and is still looking!). Nevertheless, he proved to be a loyal and caring friend to both Severus and then his mate :) Thank god he didn't need to SCAN Harry, I don't think I would survive it!

    By the way, I am really surprised Harry hasn't miscarried. A strong lad he is, indeed. Not that I wanted him to, I am so so glad he didn't!

    Thank you so much for the chapter :)

    Do you have an account with ArchiveOfOurOwn? If not, I do wholeheartedly recommend :)
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  • From BAFan on February 09, 2016
    Ch. 17

    I've been remiss in reviewing this story, sorry. I like the slightly different twist on the Ministry Marriage Law trope, with the emphasis being on begetting babies rather than on marriage itself. Refreshing.

    "If Draco was going to try and sabotage Ron and Hermione’s relationship, Harry was going to do everything in his power to help his best friends stay together." - Oh, Harry, I don't think Hermione's going to be grateful if you interfere!

    I hope you don't mind if I offer a couple of corrections:

    // " . . . and in your current state I wouldn’t risk letting you out beyond the castle walls less you lose control like you did last night.”. . . . // (from Chapter 15, I think)

    It should be "lest you lose control," meaning "for fear of" or in this case, "for fear that." Also, apostrophes are not needed for plural nouns (e.g., Dursleys, Potions, Slytherins) unless they're also possessive (e.g., the Potions' classroom, the Dursleys' house, the Slytherins' common room). Okay, I'm done!


    ~Debbie
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  • From staar on February 07, 2016
    OMG OMG i hate you !!!!!!! no i don't but but you end it there 1!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please please update soon and Harry can't die noooooooooooooooooooooooooo
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on February 07, 2016
    Such a cliffhanger! I really really hope beyond hope that Harry will live in the end. It would be such a tragedy for Sev AND for the readers if Harry, after all the trouble, was truly dead. And the BABY! What about the innocent baby?!

    Draco did a really solid job finishing off Voldie, go Draco!

    Thank you for the chapter :) I am sorry to hear you are dissapointed with the number of comments you are getting now. You must understand that it's been so many years and now you have to rebuild your relationship with your readers.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on February 07, 2016
    That is so unfair leaving the story at this point.
    NO way can Harry leave Severus now they are just finding each other.
    Well done Draco on finishing Voldemort.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on February 07, 2016
    How will the final battle go? When will Fudge, his idiots, the order and the vampire realise the students have left for Hogwarts?
    How will Harry react once he learns of his pregnancy? Please upload the next chapter as I really need to know.
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  • From ANON - Severus_is_Mine on February 05, 2016
    I've waited a long time for u to finish this story. So in love. Please don't stop. All of your stories are just so great.
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on February 05, 2016
    Harry pregnant! I cannot say I am surprised but I am certainly pleased with the turn if events. I love reading about pregnant Harry, maybe it's a kink, I don't know.

    It's a hard task indeed to change the Magical World's view of the vampires The solution IS easy but still, they fight it driven probably by fear. Well, they WILL have to come to an agreement one way or the other :D There's a lot at stake in this war.

    Thank you for new chapters :)
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  • From staar on February 04, 2016
    will Harry ever change going and not telling anyone...Snape is going to have a fit with this, please don't let any of them get killed !!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - SinfulMind on February 04, 2016
    Welcome back, Riffraff. I have re-read your fics so many times already that I know them by heart :) I am glad there is a chance your WIPs will be finished.

    As for new chapters. We are quite rapidly closing in on the final battle or so I understand from what I read :D I must confess I feel quite put out at the mere mention of Harry sharing Severus with anyone at all in the future. I hope Sev never scents another potential mate! I did swallow that bitter pill reading 'Guilty as Sin' and even though I enjoyed that fic immenesly, I was still not exactly satisfied and wanted to see more of HP/SS and in the way there was this SS/DM... haha, it's just me.

    Anyway, I really enjoyed the last chapters and I feel bad for poor Harry for only now realising he could very well get pregnant (chuckles). And about other mates... I do not believe I could bear it were I in his position. I cannot wait to see what will happen on the battlefield.

    Thank you, Riffraff :)
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  • From staar on February 03, 2016
    this is so good, can't wait for more !!!:):):):)
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  • From taoofsnape on November 07, 2014
    Oh crap, please post a new chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Mari on July 16, 2013
    I hate when people don't finish their stories and it's been like 6 years! So annoying!
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  • From ANON - Kezzasilver on May 17, 2013
    Arrrrrgh I'm really enjoying this and then it stops.
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