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Reviews for Against His Nature

By : harriet
  • From ANON - woof on December 20, 2006
    So how 'bout a smutty plot???? :)))))) What the heck, just keep writing!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ladynight on December 20, 2006
    I like it so far, i can be patient and wait for the Sev/harry interaction to pick up. Besides you update reguarly that's a plus!
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  • From ANON - thing 1 on December 20, 2006
    Ignore them, I say! So, there hasn't been much smut...It only makes my anticipation mount! Lol. I like Octavia. He seems sort of easy going but you don't want to mess with him either. Update real soon!
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  • From ANON - anon on December 20, 2006
    It is a good story. Stop listening to the whiners and finish it. I thank it will be good once all the detials come together. One comment the chapters could be a little longer but i still like it

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  • From ANON - Autumn on December 20, 2006
    Wow, you got a lot of chapters out since last I checked! Wonderful additions, all of them. The plot is developing nicely and don't you listen to those who cry not enough smut, because smut is absolutely pointless and pathetic without plot to back it up. Smut alone is just poorly done porn that people write to get off to. I much prefer a well-developed plot with smut.

    How Snape reacted to Harry, how the scent was developed, is very interesting and a new, original spin to things. I like it very much.

    Quick question, do you have a beta? While there aren't any spelling errors I caught, and technically the grammar is mostly correct, it seems like a very stiff way of writing. You should consider dividing sentences with commas, which when you use seem to be in awkward places, and then there are areas where you don't use them at all that would greatly benefit having a comma thrown in. Consider getting a beta if you don't have one. I'd offer to beta for you, but I can't promise to be on every single day though I am on quite often, and it seems you update frequently. If you do want to take my offer, please feel free to e-mail me.

    I hope you don't take any of this offensively, as it isn't inteded to be. I truly love the story and mean no offense, so don't take this as a flamer. Keep up the good work and I look forward to more chapters!

    ~Autumn
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  • From ANON - Zuka on December 20, 2006
    i'm so happy i cant wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - manda on December 20, 2006
    can't wait to read the next chapters
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  • From ANON - Natalie on December 20, 2006
    Eh kill the bad people for upsetting you! Your story is really good, I love it and will keep reading it. You're a really talented author.
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  • From ANON - juno on December 20, 2006
    Well I don't know about everyone else but I love this story exactly as is written. Keep up the wonderful work RiffRaff.
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  • From ANON - Fantasy on December 20, 2006
    Very nice story so far, I really like how things are going. :)
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  • From ANON - AislinnNicole on December 20, 2006
    Thanks for the update!

    I don't know who's bugging you about how your story should go, but I have faith that you'll always write a fantastic fic! I know we all adore the smut, but I also know you'll get to it in time. Besides, I prefer a great fic, regardless if there's a ton of smut and blood or not.

    Thanks again riffraff! Keep up the great work! :D
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  • From ANON - angel on December 20, 2006
    wow that was great .. i love it .. hmm what is albus going to say when he finds out that harry is snape's mate .....how will harry act .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please uodate soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - Chavela on December 20, 2006
    Chapter 16

    PLEASE MORE SOON! And when are we going to get something good from Severus and Harry.

    And please do not tell me that it is Ginny that Draco likes... goodness she gets on my nerves. Please let it be Hermione. *send word to above* LOL!

    This is getting better and better with each chapter!

    I hope you post more soon.

    PEACE♥
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  • From ANON - snarry lover on December 20, 2006
    oh honey (sends you lots of cookies and chocolates ^_^), no matter what you write, it's always going to be pleasing (and way beyond that). the best smut is in fics with awsome plots and my dear, your stories are always exceptional. fanfic is for you to write without having to appease anyone. its just for you. so enjoy writing it whatever way you feel like and dont let others piss you off. if it doesnt go the way others want, they can just leave. cheers and happy hols!!!
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  • From ANON - J.S. on December 20, 2006
    I'm surprised that Harry hasn't yet tried to do something rash and eliminate Snape himself. I can't wait to see how Snape plans to woo Harry. :)
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