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Reviews for Something That Shouldn't Be

By : JiLLiNe0
  • From ANON - Lisa on December 13, 2006
    Lol that as good. Nothing like a good fiht man lol. Cool chappie. Poor Ron bored to death and careod Luna. Youe boyfriends funny. I hope u do post them I lmao. More more please. Goodluck with the minpor case of writers block. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 12, 2006
    Sorry but you lost me right here with the first chapter. When has Hermione EVER been upset by anything Malfoy has said to her. If he ever did insult her in that way she'd probably just sneer at him for being so superficial. D/Hr writers love to show Malfoy upsetting Hermione because it feeds into the whole dominant bad boy /submissive good girl fantasy they go for. But if you actually look at the characters in canon Hermione is the one who gets under his skin, not the other way round
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  • From ANON - daonleesam@yahoo.com on December 12, 2006
    lolz
    i enjoyed it
    update soon!
    email me to let me know you' ve updated.
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  • From DarkLady on December 12, 2006
    erm while I am enjoying the fic so far I will recommend you change the character in your story of "Zambini" to his canon name "Zabini" :) Good go at it so far though :)
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  • From ANON - Avanell on December 11, 2006
    Ha! I'm still enjoying it. Love that poor Luna is chasing Ron...and as for Blaise and Draco? Hopefully they'll both try for Mione :)
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  • From ANON - breanna on December 10, 2006
    love it so far! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 08, 2006
    can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 07, 2006
    Omg lol Light socket. so funny. anwyays good chappie. more more more please. and hehe isnt Hermione lucky two slytherin's lusting for her. adn They both openly aired it in front of Harry. Ohhh dear are they gonna have a hard time getting to her with them around. Hary's quite possessive of his friends lol. unless he imagines Hermione to be something more. . woot woot. who knows. but more pleasee. and Please ohh please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Leli on December 07, 2006
    SNORT @ your boyfriends last line. That's one way to end a chapter, and any chance of a Malfoy heir. I hopey our poor kitty is doing well. But, back to the fic. I enjoy where its going. I've always had a bit of a soft spot for pumpkin pie, so I wouldn't mind a little Harry/Hermione sprinkled in with my Dramione. I also don't mind the shorter chapters, simply because the ones that drag on always get cut off on my cell, which is what I use to frequent AFF. Well, anyways, kind of let this review get away from me, didn't I? Lol. Can't wait for more. (I'm just hoping not too much more of Zambini - I can't stand him since HBP) ~Leli
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  • From ANON - Avanell on December 07, 2006
    Having them both fight for her would be interesting...but I hope Hermione isn't a virgin...that would be so shocking for them ;)
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  • From ANON - adrienne on December 05, 2006
    more please!
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 05, 2006
    It is quite interesting. I cant wait to see more. Update soon. Please. Lol Ron's gonna beat his pasty butt lol. funny.
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  • From ANON - CATEYE on December 04, 2006
    I LIKE IT SO FAR,I HOPE FOR MORE! DRACO SURE IS SOMETHING ELSE!
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  • From ANON - lisa on December 04, 2006
    Poor Hermione. Draco can be sooo cruel. but I am sure she will get him back after her good cry. Poor Kitty. Hope things get better. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2006
    :) great.
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