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Reviews for Coming Home

By : Pheobi
  • From erospandora on July 02, 2010
    i like it its skippy through time which i'm not sue to but i like it can't wait for more.


    ~eros
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  • From ANON - ZukoRocks30 on June 30, 2010
    I've enjoyed your writing! While I have read several Veela-mate stories before, yours seems to have a fresh taste on the emotions involved. Thanks for a story that keeps holding my interest! Keep up the good work! :-)
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  • From misaki on June 27, 2010
    wow this story is awesome! please let me know when u update! katrinadax@yahoo.com
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  • From NightLo on June 26, 2010
    Just wondering now they are finally a couple, how would the general public or even the ministry react? And how will the two response?
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  • From Dracoismydragon on June 25, 2010
    I have this sneaking feeling that someone is going to die and it worries me. I really enjoy this story and although I do prefer Dom!Harry you do it well. Keep with it!
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  • From ANON - Booklady on June 25, 2010
    This is a nifty story! I somehow keep waiting for Ginny to swing around and bite them in the ass, though. I'm really enjoying your story and I'm impressed with the way you make it fit the song lyrics.
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  • From Angelkitty7888 on June 24, 2010
    Awesome as always!! i'm glad you're back and can't wait for more :D keep it up! your work flows really quite well even when you think it's choppy and it's fairly believable for the world they're in So Thanks!!!!
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  • From ANON - Larimar on June 24, 2010
    Wow, you really have your work cut out for you, trying to follow the songs in order! You are doing an incredible job! I love the little glimpses in each scene, and as hard as it is to maintain, the flow is still very good! Keep up the story, it's awsome!
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  • From ANON - sweetteetwo on June 23, 2010
    I was glad to see a new chapter.
    but sad to see that you had to tell
    some people off hope I was not one of
    them because I love how real your charcter's
    are. so please up date when you can.please
    email me when you up date.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on June 23, 2010
    I know this story is more about Draco and Harry being mates before getting rid of Voldemort, but there is one question I have. How are Draco's parents taking the situation? Lucius is a Death Eater, after all.

    Keep up the great work.....
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  • From thyladyx on June 23, 2010
    it was a very akward song to tie into the story. But I think you managed to pull it off nicely. you know all through chapter 4 I kept being reminded of this video on youtube. if you put Bill Kaulitz und ehm yea in the search box its the first thing that comes up. its kinda funny you might consider checking it out. This is really great so far. cant wait for more. it does sadden me that this has been in the making for 3 years and isnt completed. *tears trickling* please update soon *pouts*
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  • From ANON - sweettee on January 27, 2010
    I am the same sweettee who asked that
    when you up date to please email me at
    sweetteetwo@yahoo.com thank you
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  • From ANON - sweettee on January 27, 2010
    please up date soon because I liked the first
    7chapter's that I have read so far.I would like
    to see what happens next.when you up date please
    email me thank you.
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  • From thrnbrooke on March 24, 2009
    Had to reread this!
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  • From ANON - Lumcer on October 11, 2008
    I quite enjoyed it. I belive i am going to have to look up those songs now. by the way the whole entire touch thing engenious really.

    KCK-Lumcer
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