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Reviews for Coming Home

By : Pheobi
  • From ANON - ZooArmy on December 29, 2006
    Heya!
    I really liked the third chapter a lot. (if being a veela is going with all the things you mentioned - I AM SO DEFINITELY AM A VEELA ^^ *cough*wishthinking*cough*) The fourth was, well, don't know...it needed to be, sure. But I have a rather large antipathy against Ginny (don't ask me why, I couldn't answer it in the slightest, it's just like that)
    Can't wait for another chapter, because till yet you can coun't me in as a loyal reader. ^^
    Would you put me on the mailing list, please?
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  • From ANON - Anja on December 29, 2006
    It is magnifisent, i want more!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - solaris on December 29, 2006
    i don't usually like harry/ginny, even if it will become harry/someone-else but i like your story so far. i feel really bad for everyone poor draco falling for attached harry and poor harry and ginny in love but forced apart... i hope harry isn't to bitter and doesn't start blaming draco as it is not his fault. anyway keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - azlover on December 29, 2006
    Wah!!! Luv it!!! So the best Veela yet..... Duz this make me the 51 review? huh?! duz it?! Pleez Post More!!!
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  • From ANON - Jena on December 29, 2006
    i have to admit that this is confusing on the Dom and sub issue...as a collared submissive myself you have portrayed Draco as a sub and Harry as the Dom, yet you say at the top of the last chapter that it is the other way round. Confused here...
    if u know of any sub veela Draco stories let me know...as i am quite fed up of Dom veela Draco ones...but overall i am enjoying this story so ar.
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  • From ANON - amanda on December 29, 2006
    hello!! i love your story so far, and hope you finish it. i am hoping ginny is not going to be a backstabing ho to harry, but it is usualy happens in these type of stories. will she? keep going please
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  • From ANON - Jaimie on December 29, 2006
    okay, here's my review! hopefully you'll reach 51 soon so i can read more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2006
    more please?
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  • From ANON - Angelkitty on December 29, 2006
    amazing as per the usual :) i really do feel badly for ginny.... Is she going to try revenge? just curious she seems heartbroken enough to damn the consiquences.... gotta love mates.... i guess lol

    Please update soon?
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  • From ANON - Kermit on December 28, 2006
    Great Story
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    great chapter the story is really getting along please post the nect chapter

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  • From SlashySnitch on December 28, 2006
    Fast updater, aren't you? This is great! I like Dom!Draco...sorry if I upset you about asking, though. I didn't mean to make you upset. I can't wait for the next chapter...

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - Rowan on December 28, 2006
    So far so good. But the song lyrics at the end of the story aren't really necessary. I understand that they're there to show emotional intent, but couldn't you just put a couplet or two in? I'd much rather read your prose instead of someone else's.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 28, 2006
    great chapter please continue with the story

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  • From ANON - Draca on December 28, 2006
    So sorry, I didn't think that I had offended you so much. Your logic does have reason though. On with the review, good chapter, I enjoy the plot nad the lyrics, keep up the good work!
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