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Reviews for Coming Home

By : Pheobi
  • From Angelkitty7888 on December 28, 2006
    ooh.... i love it still! can't wait to read more... this really is turning out to be wonderful!

    You know Draco kinda does rimind me of a cat here... if i come home from one of my friends houses and that friend has a cat she has to ignore me for a bit then she has to rub all over me to get her scent back on me... and god forbid i'm away longer than a day or two lol...

    And it's good to see that Harry acctually cares a bit... and is noticing his looks and stuff... that bodes very well... doesn't mean i can't feel a bit bad for ginny (unless she goes psycho and tries to kill him)... though i do think he's better off with Draco in most cases :)
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  • From ANON - Ryia_Ritsu on December 28, 2006
    not liking the demanding reviews thing, good story though! I love draco veela fics!!!
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  • From SlashySnitch on December 28, 2006
    Yay! (Reviewing for chapter 1) This is pretty sweet! Love Veela!Draco when it's written like this. Dom!Draco, Sub!Harry, right?!?!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - Draconayzia on December 28, 2006
    nice chapter. interesting developments.

    a little aside though, reviews tend to slow down as a story progresses for most authors so requiring a certain number of them for new chapters might not work. just a note.
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  • From ANON - Splodge on December 28, 2006
    this story is shaping up to be a well thought out one, however, be careful not to put too many ideas from similar fics into this one, in particular the "sugar" cravings and the "voice" are both extremely similar to "Veela Engima" by Jennavere. Use different characteristics for your Veela and make him your own.
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  • From ANON - wizli on December 28, 2006
    I loved the chapter, specially the way Harry is trying to understand more about Veelas and their mates but I'm sorry for Draco, all this must be so difficult for him *hugs him*. I missed Ginny's reaction to the whole veela/mate bussiness after Draco's attack, maybe next chapter?.
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  • From ANON - mumstheword on December 28, 2006
    simply awesome!
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  • From ANON - sak on December 28, 2006
    While your story is interesting, I am not fond of authors who refuse to post until her numbers reach a certain point. A writer offers a story in hopes that other people like it as much as she does, not to hold hostage until a "quota" is reached. It's nice to hear how people respond, but the nature of beast is only a fraction do. Either live with it or don't post it. Writing is not a numbers game. It is something you enjoy doing.
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  • From ANON - lyric on December 28, 2006
    Love it so far! Hope you have time to update!
    HARRY AND DRACO FOREVER!!!
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  • From ANON - Galion on December 28, 2006
    I'am begining to like your writing style so keep it up, cause you got 1 more loyal reader.
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  • From ANON - Yukiko on December 28, 2006
    wow, I like it so far and I can't wait to read more of it :)

    one review less :P
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  • From ANON - becca on December 28, 2006
    great so far, can't wait to see where it goes from here!
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  • From ANON - angelkitty7888 on December 28, 2006
    oooh.... i'l review 10 times myself if it means that you'll write/post more!!! i [b]love[/b] this! please please please continue *puppy eyes*

    i like this story because you are making it flow beautifully, your caracters are showing a true depth and your world seems truly real not just a fiction :) (i had to put at least part of a true review lol)
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  • From ANON - Jojo on December 28, 2006
    It is indeed a Draco!veela story with a twist. Qite nice, if I do say so myself... so, continue!
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  • From ANON - Jaimie on December 28, 2006
    wow. i like this. i was also cautious of this story, but i really like how its written. poor Harry has so much on his plate, how is he going to deal?
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