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Reviews for Kill the Magical World

By : wimvincken
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on July 27, 2020

    A great story line.  I’ve often thought that Dumbledore’s ‘protection’ of Harry did as much harm as good, even if it kept him alive.  The only love or friendship Harry ever knew was in the Wizarding world, not the muggle world.  To isolate Harry there, away from his friends, bordered on cruel, and if Dumbledore had lost Harry to the dark forces in the Wizarding world, he’d have only himself to blame.

    Alas, like so many stories on this website, it ends suddenly and without any real resolution of the problems Harry, Ginny, and The Order face.  The editing of this story was generally good and consistent, but there are definitely some holes and errors that should have been caught and corrected.  I suppose the best thing I can say is that when I reached the end, I wanted more.


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  • From jackaniny on July 29, 2007
    I really like how it's gone so far, but I'm frustrated that I've come to the end!

    Update please!
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  • From drdeth1973 on March 05, 2007
    Great story, I look forward to the next chapter
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  • From dadscooking on January 24, 2007
    Excellent chapter! Truly inspired! Keep it up.
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  • From dadscooking on January 24, 2007
    I have to admit I was hesitant to read a story of "grey" Harry, however you started wonderfully.
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  • From ANON - Keith on January 09, 2007
    Great story. Keep it coming. Any store with Dark Harry is a good story.
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  • From ANON - elleminnowpee on January 07, 2007
    I am in love with this story. Grey Harry is wonderful! I usually ship HHr but I can actually tolerate this Ginny. Nice job! I can't wait for Draco Malfoy's fall! Update real soon!
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  • From ANON - niklophliac on December 25, 2006
    The story is awesome fun and nothing like I have read before. I was especially fond of the innocence of harry and ginny throughout the chapters, it was refreshing and nice. I look forward to read more chapters when you are done with them.

    Keep going.:)


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  • From ANON - kratos on December 09, 2006
    a dam fine story I just love it keep up the good work. Thanks and bye.
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