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Reviews for Triangle Disease

By : wimvincken
  • From Gwenfrewi on August 14, 2007
    Okay, I had to leave a review on Chapter 4. Moody telling Harry the birds and the bees in his Moody-like fashion. Hysterical. I can't stop laughing!
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  • From johnny1701 on August 01, 2007
    good so far can't wait until you finish the story
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  • From Xair5 on March 30, 2007
    I feel apauled at reading this story cuz i know u didnt write it u took someone elses work u should be ashamed
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  • From warrenzimmerman on February 05, 2007
    Boooooo boooo wtf im going to tell u how ot should have been donne the first chapter was fine just fine nice twist funny but ther whole harry hates the headmaster thing no nooooo not cool second after they were told they should have been in shock then married before the shock wore off then been herried off to a nice enclosed room after harry got a potion to make him harder them chinesse algebra anf the grils potions to make them "ready" and ovultating or some more receptive or somthing your being a little to creative a little to far out there. then u should have spent the next 2 chapters in detail describing EXACTILY what every last thing harry didi to those girls from how fast he took off their cloths to how long he got borred with regular positions and went for the kama sutra period.
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  • From LadyKind on February 03, 2007
    hahaha that was awesome wish there was more
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  • From koppe on January 15, 2007
    Great so far... keep it comming. I especially *loved* Mad-Eye giving Harry "the Talk"... *snort*
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  • From ANON - joe on January 08, 2007
    I think that mad eye's ''teachings'' was one of the funniests things I HAVE EVER ENCOUNTERED.
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  • From ANON - Shadow on January 07, 2007
    I like Moody's choice... Vivienne is cool. So is Elisha, Elaine, and Elizabeth... And may I commend you on Helga and Hannelore? I love those!

    Good luck! Great job on this as well. I like the ridiculousness of Moody's conversations.
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  • From ANON - anonymous on December 10, 2006
    I would agree with what has been said here. Your writing style leaves much to be desired, and the characters are horribly OoC. If you're going to use characters that already exist then you should use them in the style the original author has. What you have are a shell that looks like Harry, Ginny, or Hermione but have put a different personality inside.
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  • From ANON - red on December 10, 2006
    please update soon i like this it is funny
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  • From ANON - red on December 10, 2006
    i feel sorry for ron going to be at school all by him self both his best friends gone
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
    too much fluff, bad writhng structure,feels like you copy and pasted the whole thing.

    If I had to guss I would think you are in 9th grade.
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  • From ANON - americanwerewolf on December 09, 2006
    wow could have been good, to bad you turned them in to little spoiled brats. but the end of the second chapter
    i wanted them not to go through with it so they could die, and then bratty harry would shut up.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 09, 2006
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    I think this story should be Rated R or lower. clearly this is not NC 17
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