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Reviews for change

By : starsmore
  • From SlashySnitch on December 13, 2006
    Different. I have a story named 'Changed', so when I saw this, I *almost* thought this was a copy/plagerized version of my work...but it's not! You're English is fine, but maybe you should request help of a Beta. I'll gladly help you; I Beta for two other people (I used to Beta for three, but one stopped writing). If not, then that's fine; you can request a Beta in the Beta section of the Main Categories.

    Slashy Snitch

    P.S: Great story so far, though you might wanted to have used more names, even though we know who they were. Just a thought!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 13, 2006
    That was wonderful! I look forward to the story!
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  • From ANON - Heksy on December 13, 2006
    What do you mean, your English is flawless.
    As English is not my first language either, I know how hard it is to write something that captures a mind instantly.
    But you did quite well on your first try.
    Because my e-mail keeps "hidden" (although I changed it several times now...*grumble*), I will post it here, if you wish to reply.
    heksy69@planet.nl
    Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Kireania on December 13, 2006
    Very nice start. I can't wait to read an elaboration of this. I like the way it is written and everything. If you need a beta or anything just email me. Can't wait for more :)

    Ja ne
    Kireania

    Ps my email is akitosgoddess429@comcast.net
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