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Reviews for Relax

By : SweetTorments
  • From GuiltyPleasure on January 13, 2010
    This story is hot and written pretty well. The one thing that drives me insane though is that you constantly confused the twins' names.
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  • From on July 14, 2007
    Oooooooh, that was delicious! Yummy twincest is always a good time. Good job! ^.^
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 31, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Sybylle on January 26, 2007
    Very Good Story. Love the Fred-George-Hermione triangle.

    ja matta ne
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  • From ANON - hugh_pym on January 04, 2007
    Really good. I like the progression of Hermione from unsure to willing participant and that Hermione had a realistic sexual history. I think this works as a one-shot but you should continue writing other stuff.
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  • From ANON - kes on December 19, 2006
    amazing
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  • From ANON - Annie on December 17, 2006
    i like it.
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  • From on December 15, 2006
    Very nice!
    I've always envisioned Fred and George being very attentive lovers, and I think you showed this perfectly.
    Honestly, I think my ONLY problem with it was that I thought that the way you made Fred and George keep calling each other "brother" sounded a little awkward.
    Other than that, I think it was really great. I liked how unsure you made Hermione at first, it made it seem more realistic.
    I think it does very well as a oneshot, and I can't exactly see it developing into a full story.
    (though who knows... maybe you'll think of something?)
    Anyway, good good good!
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  • From ANON - Dylan on December 14, 2006
    Very nice. Extremely erotic. Good job.
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