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Reviews for Lilith Snape

By : MDelphi
  • From ANON - Anon on January 10, 2007
    aw only one chapter?!? its ok i like the development please update more

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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 03, 2007
    I soooo need chapter 8! Draco was attracted to Harry?
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  • From ANON - purrfus on January 03, 2007
    #7: So many questions, so few answers.

    Multiple types of Weres are interesting, but other than possible mating issues the story does not provide any socio-economic / political background / status. In JKR's books Werewolves are persecuted, so what about other types of weres in your AU?

    The chapters are short and the characters behavior is abrupt. The fic comes across more as a series of related vignettes than a story. Too much information is dumped and too much action takes place off the page instead of being brought out in the story as part of conversation or a discovery process. In other cases information is repeated.

    JKR's Harry is an abused teenage with emotional issues. Even allowing for fan fic license, this fic does not handle the revelation well. Harry turns into a girl and her only concern is how the wizarding world is going to react? Harry turns into a girl and all of the sudden is totally accepting, if cool, towards Snape? Even with allowances for the peculiarities of were-raven heritage this is way past the bounds of credibility. What about Ron and Hermione? Do they exist is this AU?

    You may have this fic clearly visualized but it isn't making the transition from your imagination to the written word.
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  • From SlashySnitch on January 03, 2007
    This...this is one of the weirdest stories I've ever read. Hmmmm...I'm not much into Female!Harry... Oh well, what do I know? Your writing is very well done, great job!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - marie_606 on January 02, 2007
    it is truely cruel of you to make a chapter that short. keep updating, you have my full attention
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  • From ANON - kags on January 02, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 31, 2006
    Need chapter 7! Please!!!!
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  • From MissiYoung on December 27, 2006
    adoring this right now. it's amazing, and i can't wait for more! the premise is good, and the girl!harryness is better than my own!!

    quick question-voldie's alive, right?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2006
    Ok...Have you ever heard of developing the plot???
    The idea in itself is interesting, but everything happens to fast!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 22, 2006
    Must have chapter 6!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 21, 2006
    Oh I can't wait for chapter 5! What will Draco have to say about all of this?
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  • From ANON - wizli on December 20, 2006
    Lilith has vampire blood and she's bonded with Draco?. I can't wait to read the next chapter, that's going to be one hell of a conversation! ^^. Good work, very original with these little plot twists.
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 20, 2006
    Must have chapter 4!!!!
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 15, 2006
    Oh I need chapter 3!
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  • From ANON - Wendy on December 15, 2006
    OKAY... (Taps foot.) WHERE IS THE REST OF IT?
    :-) Please update soon.
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