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Reviews for Payback

By : lpicw
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on December 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - mia on November 30, 2007
    wow,love the story,but its quite creepy..i'd love it if u write another story like this..malfoy and his
    friends found a mysterious girls and do sumthin they shouldnt do,but dont kill her.. no revenge or anythin scarry.. why not make a dark fic that will end wit happy ending,maby malfoy decided to be with the girl after that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 04, 2007
    Didn
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  • From ANON - Priscilla on January 22, 2007
    Wow I will be blunt I didn't like the ending much I think it ended to soon but the story plot was good I wish there was a sequel It would be nice and you went quickly also. But a good story.
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  • From ANON - TiffanyK on January 22, 2007
    Really liked the setup but the ending really sucked. If you don't want to continue a story just stop don't kill it like that.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 29, 2006
    ...This reminds me of a very Harry Potter version of "V for Vendetta"
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  • From ANON - ocard on December 28, 2006
    whoa. that was... interesting. nice story, nicely written, but did draco really have to rape the poor girl? with four other people? oh well, i'll keep reading the story, since i have no idea where you want to take it. if you want it to be a dark fic, then you should have Gilly kill Hermione in front of Draco... or maybe the other way around... it doesn't matter, you're a fabulous writer and i am sure this story will turn out just as good =)
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on December 28, 2006
    Oh my, wow, so this is why she wants revenge. I cannot say that I blame her and I am sure that Draco's torture will be more than just of the physical nature. Again, wow.
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on December 28, 2006
    This story is geting good, I love it Please more update's soon.
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  • From ANON - meg on December 26, 2006
    i loved please update soon
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on December 19, 2006
    Very interesting beginning! I wonder what Draco did that would be worth dying for and the real question is, if Hermione does find out, will there still be a wedding? Again, I am very intrigued! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Bella on December 19, 2006
    Bloody excellent! UPDATE UPDATE!!!!
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  • From ANON - skye on December 19, 2006
    yikes! great start. spooky and tense with a naked Hermione a the end! lol!!
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  • From ANON - megs on December 19, 2006
    plz update soon
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