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Reviews for The Lion in Winter

By : xXBrokenDreamsXx
  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2006
    pretty good!
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 23, 2006
    Personally, I'm a huge fan too. Though those who don't like it can be a little nasty when you propose the idea. I swear, I put up some challenges and because I used just the word mpreg or called for one of the male characters to be pregnant I had someone basically tell me that my challenges were crap just for the mention of the word. But oh well, I can't give a crap about them. I like what I like and it hurts no one so I'll continue liking it. And now that I've ranted, I'll actually comment on your story (I apologize, I tend to get a bit sidetracked sometimes).

    I'm glad to see Harry standing up to Narcissa. I actually expected that considering her reaction when she saw Draco and I'm glad he didn't just let it go. Some people just think their kids are perfect. She didn't wonder why Harry hit him, it was a bit of an extreme thing to do without any kind of provocation. But I wonder even knowing now, or at least somewhat, will she care or will she still think Harry was wrong. The mindset during the time you seem to be describing often sees to wife as being basically something for the husband to do with as he pleases and as Harry seems to be the 'wife' she might not see anything wrong with him abusing Harry as he sees fit. Hmmm....

    Now I'm wondering who the cold, angry gray eyes belong to. We can jump to the obvious conclusion that it would be Draco but it would be interesting for it to be a surprise and be someone else. Though as far as I know only Lucius has gray eyes, I don't really know about Narcissa. Anyways, I can't wait for your update and if you do decide to make it an mpreg story I will be behind you 150%.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2006
    Can't think of any suggestions at the moment, but keep writing! The story is starting to come together. Maybe some longer chapters would be nice, too.
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  • From ANON - Jih Pun on December 22, 2006
    I'm loving this story so far! Any by the way, I'm a huge Mpreg fan too! So, keep up the good work and keep the chapters coming!
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  • From ANON - Tryst on December 22, 2006
    Leave it to Narcissa to get in the way. Oh man. When the chapter ended I just DESPERATELY wanted some more. I mean... it's just addicting. Pleaseee update soon!
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  • From ANON - dar on December 22, 2006
    YAY!!!! I like where this story is going!!! I like harry with some kick in him!!! Makes Draco's job harder!!!
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  • From ANON - doesitmatter on December 22, 2006
    amazing story
    and i cant wait to
    see what happens with Draco and Harry
    hope to see a new chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on December 22, 2006
    well, u do update soon!! I looove that^^I can't have enough of the story, you've got me around ur finger
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 22, 2006
    Will Narcissa found out the truth of what her precious Dragon did to Harry! I hope so! Need chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - kumori on December 22, 2006
    i kind of just stumbled on to this story. but so far i really like it. draco was a right bastared that first night, and i hope that harry tells his mother why he hit draco. well i look forwared to your next chapter. good luck

    kumori
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on December 22, 2006
    That Bastard!!!!!! He went and tattled to his mummy and now Harry is going to get the thrashing of his life with that wicked woman's tongue! I mean I can't possibly see Narcissa letting this go without making him pay for it at least a little, unless she recognizes the fact that hopefully Harry will rid Draco of his inflated head. I wonder what Draco has up his sleeve though? (rhetorical, I love the anticipation of not knowing what will happen next) I've also come to the conclusion that when I review (I plan on making that every chapter! ^_^) I'll rant about Draco first to calm down, which then means I can turn the review into something nice in the end. I know werid but for some reason I like leaving remarks on a positive note. As for the shortness of the chapter......I'd prefer it to be short and updated regularly (if not I'm one of those people who understand that you wonderful authors do have lives outside of AFF, I'll just be more elated when you review) some authors I know update every decade and the chapters are still short, so believe me when I say no one has a right to flame you over it. Thank you as well for clearing up the contraceptive thing, I actually like the difference where the reason he needed it was not because males could get pregnant in his world but it comes from Draco's side, the idea is original. Alright I think I'm done!lol Anyway I loved this chapter and look forward to the next, thank you for the update and continue with the brilliant work!
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  • From ANON - Melodelic on December 21, 2006
    I really like this story. I think that the way you've taken the classic Harry & Draco and made it basically your own. Can we get a small scene of the wedding or even before that? I think that would make it more understandable about Harry's feelings.
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 21, 2006
    It did answer my question. So Harry can have kids. Are you planning that to be part of the story or will it just remain a mention? Or would you prefer to keep that a mystery? I would love to see an m-preg.

    I'm glad to see Draco and Harry getting along a bit better, though Draco's definitely going to have to make some changes to himself before they can really get closer. Fear is not respect, Bad Draco! Anyways I can't wait to hear what Narcissa has to say. I can't imagine that it will be all, or any, good considering how upset she was over Draco's bloody nose. Though she can't say he didn't deserve it considering what he did to Harry, he deserved more than that, though I guess she wouldn't know that. Or then again even if she did know specific circumstances, she might not see a problem. Royals seem to have a different thought pattern than most other people. Oh well:) I can't wait until your next update, I hope it comes soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 21, 2006
    write more!!! I like how the plot is going (even if it is a bit overdone)
    I anxiously await a new chapter!
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  • From ANON - mayu on December 21, 2006
    i love it
    poor harry
    what is going to do narcisa
    i cant wait
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