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Reviews for The Lion in Winter

By : xXBrokenDreamsXx
  • From ANON - fallangelsquill on December 21, 2006
    I like it, but I would definately like to see longer chapters with just a touch more detail. you're doing well, keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Vex on December 21, 2006
    I love your author's note in the first chapter, lol.
    Very nice fic, I can't wait to watch their relationship grow.
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  • From ANON - chibi on December 21, 2006
    you're definitely have to update this!!!!
    >.just the kind of fic i love to read!!! i just adore dominant Draco...hehehehe!!!
    oh...anyway, Draco top right??
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 21, 2006
    Contraceptive? Oh holy moly! And yet he has no problem fighting with his spouse who just may be carrying his child. Can't wait for chapter 3!
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  • From ANON - Tryst on December 20, 2006
    Well, now. After the first chapter I wasn't sure I was going to read the second because I don't know. Something about Draco raping Hary just... I don't know. Although, if you think about it, it's kinda realistic. :D But anyways I read the 2nd chapter just cause I was curious and I was SO HAPPY for Harry! He fought back! Yay! Butttt he wasn't successfull. Oh well. Anyways, you got yourself a new fan for sure!
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  • From ANON - roxierose13 on December 20, 2006
    hm... well, first things, the thing that attracted me to the fic was the title. Have you ever read the play, "A Lion in Winter"? It's about king Richard (I think) and his 3 sons who all are vying for the throne. Throw in his wife and mistress and you got yourself a book ;) oh, and the oldest son is gay (it's kinda funny and totally unexpected actually, but based on fact). Anywho, that's what the title reminded me of. So I was wondering if it was going to be like that. Upon reading it, though, I see it's not.

    It was a little disconcerting when Draco raped Harry, but I'm glad Harry's standing up to him because don't I hate submissive characters, lol (well, in sex it's okay, because someone has to be, and I do prefer Harry, but yeah... sorry, I'm really picky. I can't help it). I've read a few other fics kinda like this with the prince and Harry, etc. Though, I've never finished any (mostly 'cause they never get done, but I do also bore very easily. I really don't know what's wrong with me...) ANYWAY, your fic is interesting, and I like fics that don't go the general direction. They tend to get boring after a while. One thing, though, that's bothering me. In a lot of your dialogue, you use improper punctuation (or actually, you use none). you say: "blah blah blah" Said so and so. It really should be: "Blah blah blah,(comma)" s(lowercase)aid so and so. I hope this is helpful. If not, try a beta who can explain it better and help to correct it :) Better fics through beta's :D Plus, proper grammer makes it a lot easier to read and will attract more people to the fic :) good luck!
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on December 20, 2006
    Rationality was never one of my strong suits either, but that's fine cause this idea is wonderful and I don't really care for all the little things in the grand scheme of things as long as a fic is well written (which this is).

    I like tha pace at which this is progressing and more than that I like the speed at which you update so keep up the great work and keep the chapters coming.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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  • From ANON - Zuka on December 20, 2006
    oh please please continue i cant wait for an update.
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on December 20, 2006
    OMG!! if u update like this I'll be at ur feet in no time, loved the chapter but I do need more!!!
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on December 20, 2006
    Yes I did like this chapter and I can't tell you how glad I am that you made Harry stand up for himself, though I wonder how well that will turn out *winces*. It's nice that you've made him a little more open in your story about his problems, I usually read fics where he does nothing but try to hide his pain (usually the only fics with a touch of reality) and had him confide in Hermione. I have one question though, why did Harry tremble when Hermione said it was a contraceptive? Is he worried that he'll be raped by Draco again? Anyway thank you for updating, your still doing a wonderful job and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - lolo on December 20, 2006
    great
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 20, 2006
    AAAAA!!!! Stupid thing erased my review and I don't remember what I wrote. I know I asked about the contraceptive. Does Draco using it mean that Harry can/will get pregnant? If so, cool:D I'm glad to see Hermione, I've developed a real appreciation for her character.

    Also I just wanted to add that I agree with you completely. Dom!Harry and Sub!Draco just doesn't seem right at all. Harry just doesn't strike me as a dominant kind of guy, his character just feels too passive (minus the angry outbursts of OOTP). And Draco just seems too... Draco to put up with being a bottom.
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  • From ANON - Turkbro on December 20, 2006
    write a lot!!! it will keep reviewers happy...at least me ;)
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  • From SlashySnitch on December 20, 2006
    Looks promising! I like - wait, scratch that - I LOVE Dom!Draco, so you can bet that I'll be back to read this! Great job so far. I hope you can make an exception to these stories; most of the ones I've read so far are quite similar, so I'm hoping yours will be different. Good Luck!

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - Bookworm51485 on December 20, 2006
    So far, I like your beginning. Are we get to get more background though? Like how this marriage came about and exactly who Draco and Harry are in this universe? Also what was that that Harry drank? So many questions, I hope your planning to update soon so hopefully some of them can be answered.
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