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Reviews for The Lion in Winter

By : xXBrokenDreamsXx
  • From ANON - CelticWitch on December 20, 2006
    I like stories with Harry as Sub and Draco as Dom. Story sounds very interesting and promising. Please keep it up and update daily. Good Job!
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  • From ANON - Sakya on December 20, 2006
    If you say it will be better I'll believe you, but you better up date soon before we start a hunting party to get Draco and turn him into a rug.
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  • From ANON - Anyanka on December 20, 2006
    I think it's going to be agood story and I agree with your pov of this kind of stories, can't wait for the next chapter^^ but I do hope it is a happy ending story
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  • From kristashadow on December 20, 2006
    wow very dramatic beginnig, I like it!


    you've caught my attention


    shadow
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  • From ANON - rebel_mistress on December 20, 2006
    Very intriguing indeed! But could you give us more background material for this fic? I cannot seem to place the story on its supposed time frame or setting.

    Other than that, that was a really nice start. Hope you'd update soon. And I'm kind of excited to read more confrontational scenes between Harry and Draco.

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  • From ANON - mphoenix on December 20, 2006
    the first good chapter of many i hope.
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  • From ANON - kirito69 on December 20, 2006
    Oh! Do continue! I luv powerful but submissive Harry...
    To tell the truth it's my drug
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on December 20, 2006
    Poor Harry! Draco was horrible! What was that potion? Can't wait for chapter 2!
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  • From ANON - cirquegirl999 on December 20, 2006
    Oh poor Harry! *cries for ages while cursing Draco to the farthest corners of the earth* Great beginning chapter and a good way to display both the characters. I hate it that people tend to forget that Draco is mean in this pairing and that Harry isn't just a timid little thing. Thank you for sticking with the basic personality of each character. I'm so glad that you're doing this and planning on making it something that follows life's emotions more accurately, I mean I've read plenty of stories where Draco rapes Harry and basically the next day he's forgiven, it just doesn't happen that way in real life. As much as I might like some of those stories, a touch of reality is always welcome. Anyway this was a great start and I look forward to reading more of it, please update soon because you've definitely peaked my interest in how this will work out. Thank you for posting it and keep up with the great work.
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  • From ANON - Argo on December 20, 2006
    I'm totally, absolutely, fully hate Draco right now! This bastard must be in a lot pain!!! Grrr! Please, oh, please, make it so Harry had a chance for paying him back, so this rapist was very, very sorry!
    Err... You haven't explained about potion Harry had to drink. What it was for? God, I hope it wasn't for Harry to become pregnant, it would be so unfair for him. :(
    Anyway, I feel so angry and helpless right now, I want to sob.
    I hope you will explain why Harry had to marry to Draco. How on the earth his parents can do this to him?
    I also wonder why Harry is so weak and helpless against Draco, and why he is smaller and less strong than him. I mean, he is a knight's son - he must be training from childhood, so he must be very strong and skilled as warrior. On contrary, Draco is a king's son, so he must be pampered from childhood, and therefore not so strong physically. So, why it is Harry is such a weaker there?
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  • From ANON - Anon... on December 20, 2006
    Heyy... by any chance have you ever written this somewhere else? Because I swear I read something that starts off like this somewhere else... I just can't remember where and the title was different I think, because I think I would have remembered if it "the lion in winter" *grins* Its great either way.
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  • From ANON - Incessant_Darkness on December 20, 2006
    Reading fics is so not what I should be doing right now but I saw the summary and couldn't help but read. After I got through the chapter I was happy enough with most things except for one major thing, why is Draco, the prince of a nation marrying a man? And if that's what the potion is for wouldn't it still be simpler to marry a girl...anyways that's just me being critical [and yes I do realize there would be no plot unless Draco married Harry]. If I were to be more critical than that I would say that the characters seemed very forced for the moment though I know that will resolve itself as the story progresses. Overall I think you did a very good job with starting this off, I can't wait to see how things shall pan out.

    - Incessant_Darkness
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