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Reviews for Heir

By : Julianne
  • From ANON - Cheri on January 02, 2007
    Love this story so far. I hope to see more soon. H/D pairings are some of my fave stories. Can never go wrong with two hot guys(Right?)
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  • From ANON - thrnbrooke on January 02, 2007
    I like the story! Would like to read chapter 4!
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  • From ANON - drippy123 on December 27, 2006
    Hello. You need spaces between your paragraphs, as well as to make certain what needs to be capitalized is. Please, go get a beta editor/reader; they can be of great help. Also, read the dictionary and get your hands on a good English book.
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  • From kristashadow on December 27, 2006
    Is he seriously going to be a girl?
    or is that just a status thing?


    shadow
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  • From SlashySnitch on December 26, 2006
    ...Harry's a girl? Oh, PLEASE still let him have his...well, his manhood! Or, OH! (here I go) What if he only had his manhood at night, and like...no bits during the day? And, at night, his breasts went away too! Because, really, not to be mean, but that's just defeating the purpose of a harry/draco story.

    Slashy Snitch
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  • From ANON - anon on December 26, 2006
    good!
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  • From ANON - Vittani on December 26, 2006
    Hey i thought it was good, and i usually completely avoid Harry changing into a girl fics. So please update. N by the way dont know if anyones told you but in the first chapter you use the word "wood" instead of "would" three times or so. But thats just a nit pick.
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  • From ANON - Sabby on December 26, 2006
    0.o wtf?! oh hell no u can't even dare write this story >
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  • From ANON - vibora on December 26, 2006
    kinda hurried but has potential ^_^ update soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on December 26, 2006
    I like it
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  • From ANON - Kira342 on December 25, 2006
    please continue!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 25, 2006
    Isn
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  • From ANON - ice owl on December 25, 2006
    Not really sure where this is going but it was discocerting to find that you do not know the difference between would and wood. Then the whole name thing sort of got out of hand, yes? By the time I was finished reading all the names I was thinking she should just jump out of the closet wearing a tee shirt that read MARY SUE: Master of the Universe.
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  • From ANON - Melodelic on December 25, 2006
    Wow! Nice big cliffie, but I still like it! Please continue and update as soon as possible.
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