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Reviews for We begin

By : magicmint
  • From ANON - AnimeBaka on January 18, 2011
    That was actually extremely good, and pretty touching. I would love to see a sequel, but beggars can't be choosers. Great writing, and thanks for the read.
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  • From ANON - asdce1234 on December 04, 2010
    that was rediculously hot!! i want more please
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  • From ANON - the_scribbler on April 08, 2010
    April 8, 2010

    OMG - HOT, HOT, HOT story!! I loved it. It really worked on so many levels! I could see these two...our favorite couple...getting it on just like that and you detailed it perfectly. Hermione's 'uptightness' works *for* her in this case and makes the release just that much sweeter - which is something you captured beautifully. You should be very pleased with this and I hope like mad that you write more!!

    Regards,

    the_scribbler

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  • From oxtenshixo on December 05, 2007
    i love this story, and hope you updates soon. it doesnt appear as if you're in need of a beta.
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  • From ANON - Black Haired Demon on July 23, 2007
    HOLY SHIT! THIS story is a keeper!! I can't wait to read more please hurry and update.
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  • From ANON - Sara on July 05, 2007
    I really enjoy your story. Nothing is hotter than H/Hr, especially when its forbidden. Keep up the good work, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From theparisian on April 05, 2007
    UPDATE THIS! IT IS TOO GOOD TO LET BECOME LOST IN WIP LAND!
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  • From PhoenixAnkaa on February 19, 2007
    Very nicely done so far. I look foreword to seeing where you take this.

    If I may make one small suggestion, you may want to refrain from indenting your paragraphs. It's not really necessary, and to me at least, detracts from the flow of the read. Just a suggestion and not a criticism, we all have our own styles of writing after all.

    PA
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  • From ANON - Sarah Granger on January 14, 2007
    Please write more! That was perfect. ooohhh I can't wait for you to update. Harry's incredibly hot in this story and Hermione's one sexy witch. Well done, best story I've read in a long time. We need more people like you. update update update!! NOW!
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  • From ANON - Madelein on January 04, 2007
    ok update soon pleases your story was soo good there arent many out there so be proud
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  • From ANON - mandy-jg on January 01, 2007
    Oh god! That was absolutely wonderful! You must write more of this, I would love love love to read it!
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  • From ANON - Pamela on December 28, 2006
    That was good. Now I want to read more. Are you going to update soon? Are you going to continue the story? I sure hope so. Who is Harry's gf by the way?
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  • From ANON - slackjack on December 28, 2006
    Good Show!
    Me like very very much
    Jolly good show....

    Well written...the words slowly increase the tension. And you didn't just make them do it and end it there.
    The 'Parvati and Lavender' part was an excellent stimulant to initiate the plot.

    Im looking forward to a sequel...
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  • From ANON - Victoria on December 27, 2006
    oh wow. that was amazing. Please let there be more wonderful hot sex. Please!!
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  • From ANON - Rayder04 on December 27, 2006
    Quite good story!! Love the kinkyness in Hermione and I really hope to read another chapter soon. Maybe Hermione can return the favor?

    JO
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