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Reviews for Dreams

By : lepoissonbleu
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 10, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From AyaChan2006 on June 15, 2008
    hey are you going to continue this or should i just delete it from my list??
    e-mail me with your answer at kaoru_14_89@hotmail.com
    ...ta

    Aya

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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 17, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From jenessa on April 14, 2007
    I really lke this story, i was hopeing you could update soon!

    great job!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 17, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - pureangel86 on January 05, 2007
    This story gives a whole new meaning to the term 'Dream Lover'. I don't think I'll be able to hear that song with out thinking of this story...not that a bad thing.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on December 29, 2006
    Oh dern! Just when I was really getting into the story, there were no more chapters... Heck! Please update soon! I want to see what happens when Severus finally realizes that his dreams are not really dreams! Poor Hermione... Not the best way to lose one's virginity!
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  • From ANON - Alexa on December 28, 2006
    Ooh good one, and I really like that this one was longer. This story has really great potential, but I would definitely like reading some more details. Especially since there's this really interesting prospect with the dreams, I'd like to read more on the development of it. And poor Hermione, getting her hopes up for detention =( I think Snape will have to make it up to her later haha.
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  • From ANON - Bris on December 28, 2006
    Interesting story so far - very erotic - keep it up!
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  • From ANON - BrianDarksoul on December 28, 2006
    ead upto chapter 3
    Very intruiging and rather inspired.
    From what I gatjher in my uneducated thoughts is that somehow
    Severus and Hermoine have a psychic link and a astral physical one on the side.

    Well that's my guess. A rather uninformed and vauge one at that.

    A rathe erotic readf sofar nice tastefull and intruiging!
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  • From ANON - Maria on December 28, 2006
    I really like the concept and I'd like to read the rest of this, but please consider adding more detail. Some stories are so packed with unecessary detail it's maddening, but your writing is actually too sparse with the details.

    For example, when Snape tells Hermione to bend over the chair, you don't write what she's thinking or feeling, you just jump to a half hour later in the story. As a reader, the build up of anticipation, fear, arousal, etc. is vital, especially with HG/SS detention stories. If you don't like describing the psychological window into the characters minds then maybe a sexy one-shot would be better? Please don't take offense to this, it's meant as constructive criticism. As I said before, I like this story, it has potential.
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  • From ANON - Citten on December 27, 2006
    now that was interesting. how did that happen and now what will happen? please don't keep us in supence for too long! :)
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  • From ANON - Estella on December 27, 2006
    Wow, greatness all around for this one. Though I can't believe you left it there. How about some more?
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  • From ANON - kirabates on December 26, 2006
    That was a mean way to leave that chapter haning!!! lol. I was looking foward to what would happe. Please hurry and write the next chapter I can't wait!!!!

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  • From Rumpelyssa on December 26, 2006
    Perhaps in the detention, Hermione could wear a short skirt and her blouse unbuttoned to the top of her bra or something.... But I'd like to read a visualisation of Snape's dream before the detention.
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