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Reviews for A Sacrifice for Love

By : SnapesSweetheart
  • From LaBibliographe on February 19, 2008
    Chapters 11-25: Wonderful story! I liked the ghost elements of Amy and her 'lover' talking and then behind them, Godric and Salazar manipulating the ghosts. Layers upon layers and they all worked out beautifully. You did a lovely job on the smut and the tension-filled dance of love that Severus and Hermione indulged in was drawn out perfectly. It was cute how you gave Neville an important place in your story and he stayed true to canon.

    The surprise was Lucius Malfoy who came out of nowhere and tried to rape Hermione. He was certifiably crazy so it was as well that Hermione turned out to have such power. I mourned his role since he's my all-time favorite character and he was so cold and evil in this. His passion for Hermione was weird and unsettling. He was really nuts, I guess. Too bad - such a waste of a gorgeous man *snerk*. Poor Draco didn't find anyone, but give him time.

    I enjoyed your story immensely. Thank you for sharing this and completing it. Kudos to you.
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  • From LaBibliographe on February 18, 2008
    Chapters 1-10: I've come late to this story and it is already completed, which reassures me. I'll be reading the rest and reviewing again, but I just wanted to pause here and let you know how much I am enjoying this story. I'm amazed that this is your first story because it is excellent. You've given us good backstories on the main characters, provided strong reasons for the things they do, and let us see their insecurities and the way they all feel about each other. The plot is intriguing and singular. I feel sorry for Amy and as usual I feel nothing but contempt for Sirius Black and James Potter. Not my favorite characters.

    I see you've now written other stories. I don't spend much time in the Harry/Draco section or here in the Snape/Hermione section. My favorite character is Lucius Malfoy and I'm found over in the Lucius/Hermione section. When I finish this I may select one of your Harry/Draco stories as a lovely change of pace. It should be easy to read if what I've been experiencing of your writing so far is any indication. **Waves** Back to your story.
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  • From blueartemis on October 02, 2007
    Very nice story. I took chelleybelle's recommendation and came over here. Good story.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 26, 2007
    I really like this story lot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From Alikat on July 19, 2007
    This was the cutest story! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Super job! Though it would have been nice if you had told us who Amy ended up with! I kept thinking Sirius! Lol!
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  • From ANON - Empress on June 05, 2007
    The highest compliment I can pay is that Hermionie remained Hermionie and Severus reamined Severus. Good job!
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  • From ANON - vonHardenberg on June 04, 2007
    Excellent story. I read it twice. Enjoyed it as much as the canon.
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  • From ANON - Shocker on May 22, 2007
    Wow, that was a wonderful story. Im glad i took the time to read it. At the end though i couldnt quite figure out who was with Amy. I think it was hinting twords dumbledor? The age difference and the cover up thing. I couldnt remember if you actually put who it was in the fic. I hope Draco finds his soul mate and then the story would truly be complete. Loved the story. Keep the muse happy, write more.
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  • From chelleybelle on May 09, 2007
    I just finished your story, I loved it! I liked what you did to Lucius. He deserved it. It is sad that Draco wound up alone though...he needed someone. Maybe you could write your next story with him meeting someone and falling in love...and of course Neville needs someone also...
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  • From chelleybelle on May 09, 2007
    I love this story! I love Hermione and Snape together. You also did a great job with Ron. I usually can't stand him because he is so whiny and useless, but in this story you have turned him into a stud! Good job! I am glad that so far Ginny is not in this story. You did mention the masterbation scene where he thought of her, but maybe she won't ever wake up and you could give Pansy to Harry. I think that they would make a great pair. I love Draco, ! Great job! I love it! I just finished chapter 9 so I will let you know again how I am liking it!
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  • From ANON - firewall on April 29, 2007
    I loved your story. LOL about the other spirit, although I shudder a bit. Hmmm, have you left yourself open to a sequel? I was just wondering about Salazar's comment that Severus would need Hermione's power in the future...ahhh, the possibilities! Anyway, nicely done and thanks for sharing.
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  • From SnapesSweetheart on April 26, 2007
    To Annie and nonentity:

    Yes, the other spirit was Dumbledore. You are only as old as you feel and I thought the spirit of Dumbledore would appreciate being a young man again. I wanted to try something different. Hope you liked it!
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  • From ANON - lydia on April 25, 2007
    this was great. very good. i can't wait to read more of your work.

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  • From ANON - annie on April 25, 2007
    wait is it albus?? is that who the other spirit was?
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  • From nonentity on April 25, 2007
    Is Amy's boyfriend Dumbledore????
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