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Reviews for Unexpected Visitor

By : AlexAnderson
  • From tinkrox10 on October 18, 2009
    dang that was HOT
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on February 16, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 02, 2007
    no offense, but you need a beta. Correct formatting will make the story much more readable. The story shows some promise, especially the first half. Also, Draco really needs to generously lube himself--either with his or her juices are artificially--before going into Hermione's butt--he'd never been able to thrust up forcefully otherwise. And it takes a while for the girl to adjust and get comfortable.
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  • From ANON - Deeply.Jaded on December 30, 2006
    Your story contains a lot of spelling errors. Can I suggest a Beta?
    I think then the comments will get better. Don't be disappointed, keep it up!

    DJ
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