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Reviews for Loves Nightmare: Hate's Dream

By : Rumpelyssa
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on May 18, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?
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  • From ANON - luciana_malfoy83 on January 25, 2007
    Gee, Bella I`m your fan, really. Another brilliant story. Another Lucius/Severus/Hermione...Three favourites in one. How do you do this? Fantastic plot.
    Do you spend half of your life constructing them? Don`t stop please. I want to read more!!!

    Love me or die...ekhm...does this ultimatum sound similar to one used by certain Sheriff of Nottingham one day in certain movie, of is it just my imagination?:))

    Awesome...as always...I can`t wait for another update.
    See you soon, Bella

    Luciana

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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on January 20, 2007
    Now that Severus knows Hermione had feelings, hope he goes after her. I think Hermione will go nuts, but Ginny will be affected to. She keeps a close eye on Hermione and will notice Snape's affection; wouldn
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 20, 2007
    Now that Severus knows Hermione had feelings, hope he goes after her. I think Hermione will go nuts, but Ginny will be affected to. She keeps a close eye on Hermione and will notice Snape's affection; wouldn
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on January 19, 2007
    Chapter Four: Snape's line, "...try not to be too Malfoy about it," was great! The name is synonymous with the behavior and so perfect. Their bickering was priceless. I love those two scratching at each other but friends.

    Draco is incompetent in this story? How so? Will that be explained later? Just curious - no compulsion to know, really, if he isn't in the story. And I actually goggled, when Arthur wondered if Lucius had blood in his veins. So this story doesn't particularly represent Lucius as successful with the ladies I presume... Either that or Arthur doesn't hear all the juicy gossip, but with a wife like Molly I think that must be impossible.

    Off! Off! Take it off! Hermione can't wear Rabbie's engagement ring. She's making a horrible mistake. Save her, Bella. You heard the voice, Hermione and Lucius are a "Done" deal. If they don't start drinking lots of lemonade soon, they might die. Their poor, parched throats are sooo dry. The firewhiskey won't do it (although it might spur some action), so serve them (and us) some lemonade forthwith!


    Oh -- and something to fix? "...she saw Lucius stand at the bookshelf with an empty whiskey glass in her hand." Should be HIS hand?

    You write quickly so here's my solution. Give Rabbie a love potion and sic him on McGonagall. 8-)
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  • From ANON - Mary on January 19, 2007
    Loved it! Poor Lucius. Hermione should take him more seriously about the dream. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on January 19, 2007
    Cackling madly!!! I love it! the raw squid line fit in perfectly! I can't wait to see how she reacts to his news! I bet she'll refuse to believe at first! I liked seeing the attraction that Snape seemed to have to both Ginny and Hermione... although, I must admit I was more curious about his attraction to Ginny...

    Smiles innocently, SD
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  • From angelnomiko on January 19, 2007
    ohhh man .... that is she going to do ... and how will rabastan take that new of is love haveing to fall in love with someone els and lucius of all people ...please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ShilohDarke on January 16, 2007
    Oh my! I love this latest chapter! It was chock full of hot limeade! I LOVED IT! That was one steamy dream! I'm speechless! I'm filled with longing for more! I can't wait to see what will happen next??? Maybe a midnight rendevous in the library??? ( BUT NO Dream this time?)

    You are doing a great job, Bella, and I feel truly honored that sch an imaginative writer picked up my challenge! 100 points to you for imagination and a wonderful way with words!

    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - Dee Dee on January 13, 2007
    That was quick how Lucius was accepted in the Order and let in headquarters. I guess he does not want to fight the prophesy or premonition that he got from the dream. I look forward to his pursuit of Hermione! But when Rob gets jealous and desperate, he could make Lucius out to be a traitor or a spy for Voldemort. I bet most of the Order would not have a problem believing that. When will Draco join the Order? Will he go after Hermione also?

    So Hermione is starting to find Lucius attractive even in her dreams, smart girl. But that could put a damper on her engagement. Her boyfriend is jealous and I am guessing Severus and Lucius will exploit that to get Hermione away form him. Also Rab seems a bit possessive of Hermione, and perhaps that is another exploitable weakness. I don
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  • From ANON - BuffyXO on January 12, 2007
    A Wet Malfoy = A Very Happy Buffy / A hot dream interrupted = A Sad Buffy

    If you want to make me happier, updating often is the quickest way to my heart, but being such a fan of your writing you really do not need much help. I do like the love triangle going on with Snape to push the right buttons at the right times. I think you have done well in pacing the story. I would like to know when Hermione had feelings for Snape and if he ever knew about them. What an interesting predicament you have landed her in! Two beautiful, dark princes both vying for her attention and love, oh to be a muse in one of your stories ...
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  • From ANON - CoralineBlack on January 12, 2007
    Uhh a love triangle, he he... What is a girl to do? But on the other hand who wouldn't want those men yearning after you?? ;-) Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - LaBibliographe on January 12, 2007
    Chapter 3: "showing off his tackle" (snort), that's a good one. Nice visual, "...he oozed out of the room." Very Slytherin. Lucius is certainy 'Rabbie-rousing'; he's always so good at goading people.

    Who doesn't have erotic dreams about Lucius in black wet swimming trunks. (And out of them...)

    Why did the Order just let Lucius in without worrying about his allegiances? I would be extremely paranoid about his going over to the other side were I a member of the Order. Are you going to have Lucius watched surreptitiously? Have Rabbie assigned, or he could volunteer. Is Rabbie now a member of the Order and not part of the Death Eaters any more because the DEs KNOW he has switched sides? Why isn't Lucius more angry at Rabbie for causing the deaths of his fellows? I suppose that self-preservation element comes into play, huh? Well, limes are good and UST is always good, too. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - angel on January 11, 2007
    man .. that is a girl to do ...sh eis dreaming of lucius and she say she hates him she going to marry rabastan ... hmm how is lucius going to stop that and sev must be having a fun time with it all ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - mary on January 11, 2007
    I love this story! Poor Hermione is having difficult times between Rabastan and Lucius. Can't wait to read the next chapter!
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