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Reviews for The Potions Master

By : minkajane
  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From catysmom1028 on February 06, 2007
    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 12, 2007
    ooooo catchy very catchy i like it i want more of it. update asap. if you if update i'll keep reviewing.lol
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  • From ANON - David on January 11, 2007
    I like where this is going. While chapter 2 is my favorite thus far, the shower scene certainly added some flair. My biggest issue with the shower scene was how it went from soaping to rinsing straight into fucking. Granted, good ol' Severus was in the "zone" so to speak, and he was just ready to go at it -- but what if Hermione teased him a bit? What if she absolutely refused to let his dick get anywhere near her until he just couldn't take it anymore?

    Anal play works, and it was certainly a good way to introduce it.

    I also like the recurring, "Are you *sure* you haven't done this before?" That leaves a bit of mystery in the air; you don't just go into a teacher's office and want to fuck and let it go. Knowing Hermione, she's definitely had a well-organized plan, and now she can have him anytime she wants.

    That said, I'm anticipating the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - crinna on January 08, 2007
    you are very skilled at writing lemons. so far this fic has been a lemon feast. i think you could give lessons in writing lemons. the soft nature of Severus is almost completely out of character, that's OK if you put an OC warning on it. there are other writers that do a very snaky dark Severus but have trouble with writing him into the bedroom you could give them a few lessons.
    if you wanted to add a little substance a few paragraphs in the beginning that describes Hermione and the reasons Snape is concerned for her. and one chapter between the first private meeting and the valentines meeting, wold go a long way in beefing up this fic. i had fun reading this, and i hope this revue is taken positively
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  • From ANON - Rae on January 07, 2007
    OOC
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  • From ANON - firewall on December 31, 2006
    Oh the little Lolita!She seduced him beautifully.
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  • From Rumpelyssa on December 31, 2006
    Hmm, rather naughty isn't she for a virgin? Where's the shy timid Hermione that was in the first chapter?

    I liked it, and can't wait to see where this is going.
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  • From Ducky on December 31, 2006
    I have to say, this is brill. Please continue. I love the fact that Severus is kind to her, but what are his reasons for being a bastard to Harry and Ron? Please update soon!!
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  • From ANON - jade on December 30, 2006
    great lemons
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