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Reviews for Beyond Pathetic

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  • From ANON - Ryu on January 03, 2007
    and I can't even spell " gem" right...* shakes head sadly *
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  • From ANON - Ryu on January 03, 2007
    Hooray! Someone that can admit to being unoriginal and even better a story that in its lovely Snapey Unsappy-ness stands out like a Tiffanys diamond among Christmas cracker cheapo crap that nobody wants. Truly a jem!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2007
    More please - this is pretty original and I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - rubberduck on January 03, 2007
    I totaly disagree with Kacy. I for myself have always hated this whole sex-god-snape-thing. It
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  • From ANON - Kacy on January 02, 2007
    Um... okay. Well, your writing is very good - easy to read, flows well, few mistakes, etc.
    You seem like a pretty clever person.
    I like how Hermione's character is shaping up - friendly, kind hearted, and such. But, other than that I'm not sure that I like the premise of this story so much.
    It was okay at first, but then... I think the patheticness of Snape gets out of control.
    He's a whining virgin feeling sorry for himself because he's in love with Hermione?
    He wants Hermione to dominate him?
    He's never even had ONE date??
    Dur... this isn't the Snape we all love and fantisize about!
    A little bit of patheticness that Snape does his best to hide is alright.
    But this is rediculous.
    You get points for originality I guess, but I'm not sure I'm going to keep reading this.
    I just makes me feel too embarrassed and uncomfortable for him.
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  • From ANON - skye on January 02, 2007
    awwww.....this is sweet. I can hardly wait for the next chapter(s)! I love your private-snape personality.
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  • From ANON - Addie on January 02, 2007
    seems so incredibly pathetic but i want more!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    Rahahahaha! Love it, love your adjectives. Poor poor Snape indeed, lol! And a virgin!! HEE HEE! I'm definitely looking forward to more. :)
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  • From ANON - faye on January 01, 2007
    it's so sweet! you should definetely continue :)
    I like snape this way :) ! good job ;) update soon!
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  • From ANON - Winnie91 on January 01, 2007
    I really enjoyed the SS point of view. Also, I like how you got into detail how "it" happened. Most authors of HG/SS just write as if it's a fact that they are in love. You did an excellent job of showing his "descent".

    Finally I love how you wrote this:

    She was horrifyingly mature.

    And he could see her cleavage when she had her arms crossed like that.
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  • From ANON - bluedecor on January 01, 2007
    "Hermione had displayed a mind numbingly sado-masochistic side"

    Please tell me you are going to explain what events got Snape's mind running in that direction in the library!
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  • From ANON - Herm on January 01, 2007
    Oh!!! Severus, a virgin?!! You're not that cruel, are you? LOL Like that a lot and I can see you're fulled of sarcasm. In fact I rather have it only in Severus' POV. It's more fun to keep guessing. :)
    Up date quick quick
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  • From ANON - melusinesara on January 01, 2007
    this story is fantastic! i can't wait to read more. there aren't enough SS/HG fics with Hermione as a professor. i love it!
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  • From ANON - amsev on December 31, 2006
    Oh, poor untouched Severus! He's such a mess. I look forward to reading more!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - chrissy on December 31, 2006
    please dont let this story go to waste like so many other unfinished stories have. i sincerely hope that you update as often as you can b/c it is truly an excellent story.
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