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Reviews for Beyond Pathetic

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  • From ANON - Mel on December 31, 2006
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE..uhh getting the idea here..LOL good story
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on December 31, 2006
    Oh my God' A virgin shit this is getting to good I can't wait for the next update's too come.
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  • From ANON - parmel on December 31, 2006
    awww poor severus. :(
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  • From ANON - Jade on December 31, 2006
    Awww. I hope you put the poor pathetic soul out of his misery soon with lots of lemons!
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  • From ANON - edania on December 31, 2006
    now this is good. You don't see a virgin snape, its been but very rare, only 4 i know done with HG/SS pairing. This is a good one. Its good to see him as virgin then most of the time he is seen as sexgod somany times in stories. love this alot.
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  • From ANON - Morrigan on December 31, 2006
    Gods, I love your Snape! He
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  • From ANON - Khaos on December 31, 2006
    ooh! I love it! Snape's just so, well pathetic. It's brilliant. I love it when snape's portrayed as a real loser when it comes to the oposite sex- it makes so much more sense than him being absolutly fantastic sex god with a monstrusly huge cock (as most fic seem to play him as). And it's nice to know snape wants to get tied up by a sexy hermione in leather and whipped. It's about time! Welcome to the world of fanfictions by the way, I can see very good things coming from you ^^
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 31, 2006
    Way to go. I love a pathetic in love Snape. Ok Ok I love Snape anyway but I enjoyed your portrayal. Good job
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  • From ANON - bluedecor on December 31, 2006
    Good start, I like the tone. I hope more to follow.
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  • From ANON - sheedy on December 31, 2006
    I love it. Your style is very refreshing. I like your humor.
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  • From ANON - Darque Hart on December 31, 2006
    The adjectives were okay. I think I just might have to see what they are like in ch. 2.
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  • From ANON - Morrigan on December 31, 2006
    Wow, you have a great writing style, very ironic and funny. More of it, and soon!
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  • From ANON - Shdwcat27 on December 31, 2006
    Poor Sev. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Aggie on December 31, 2006
    I like it, very well written and actually feels right for a SS/HS. Keep going!

    -Aggie
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  • From ANON - WickedlyWanton on December 31, 2006
    Ooo, very good start! I don't normally read the first chapter of anyone that I had not previously read fics from before, but I was bored and read this. It was wonderful! Please hurry with your next chapter. Although not perfectly original (as you said), you write so well that you had me spellbound (and a little depressed that it ended so soon!).
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