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Reviews for Make Damn Sure

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  • From ANON - citrus on January 02, 2007
    oo, i like, i like, plz continue!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    GREAT job. Keep up the good work! This is off to a very interesting start.
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  • From ANON - Jeni on January 02, 2007
    O_O MORE DAMNIT! ..........o.o.......pretty please?
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  • From ANON - LiYan on January 02, 2007
    Great start!! Can't wait to read more and find out how these two will get along.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    hey love the start, please update soon! really like draco's character as well, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Kimmi on January 02, 2007
    Pet Peeve.

    7:30am...in the morning.
    restates the fact.

    pick one or the other.
    but other than that it has promises to be a great story. i cant wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Emmylovedraco on January 02, 2007
    Oh please please more,
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  • From ANON - livelifelovehgdm on January 02, 2007
    I liked it! Keep it up! Please update fast!
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  • From ANON - Deeply.Jaded on January 02, 2007
    Oh..I really like your first chapter. And this is your first fanfic? Well done!!!
    Love it when Draco is being his bastard self!!
    Love the prospect that they would have to live together in these cercumstances.
    Keep up the good work. I'll be looking for your next chapter.

    DJ
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  • From ANON - Karen on January 02, 2007
    Pretty good, actually. What will make or break the fic will be plotting and consistent characterization, but you have a very good flow and are quite readable.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2007
    Great start, especially for a first timer! Although the concept seemed a little far fetched, we are in HP fandom and we have our Marriage Laws and what-not, so why not, right?? I love your take on Hermione - she's strong yet still kind of girly, still kind of vulnerable. I hope you continue this!
    Oh, and BTW, just because this is my pet peeve, I thought I should point out that Harry actually said his sentence grammatically correct when he said: "...in the Wizarding world besides me and Ron." I know it's tricky, but the best way to know what is correct is to get rid of the 'and (subject)'. So if you get rid of "Ron", you'll get: "you're the most famous besides me" which is correct. Otherwise, if you choose "Ron and I" and leave out the "Ron and" you'd get: "you're the most famous besides I" which is wrong.
    Not a insult to you or anything, but just wanted to let you know!

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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 02, 2007
    Very interesting start.... Original and I like it! Can't wait to see where this goes, especially with them loathing the situation so much :D
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  • From ANON - alicia on January 02, 2007
    i realii enjoyed the first chapter, and yes it was very well written for a first timer cant wiat for more ckeep it up
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  • From ANON - Addie on January 01, 2007
    ooooooh angst...
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