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Reviews for Baby Harry

By : LovelyPair
  • From ANON - Benji on January 06, 2007
    Who's the hell sayin' they hate this story!!? They must be pretty stupid if they read something they hate...dumb asses. I personaly like this story! Purely because I am a Class A Perv and proud of it! I hope there's more to this! *hint, hint* Update soon please!

    -Benji
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  • From ANON - Naomi on January 06, 2007
    OK im not saying i hate it im just saying you are kinda creeping me out cause that was just OMG but it was an interesting story not my taste but you had a fairly unique plot so it was good
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  • From ANON - BRM on January 06, 2007
    well who ever said they hate it is on crack qand pot so just ingore them cause i fucking love it!!
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  • From ANON - toki on January 05, 2007
    its an interestin and unique story. i like the story.
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  • From ANON - Z on January 05, 2007
    sorry. kitty4green* not lady
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  • From ANON - Z on January 05, 2007
    earth to lady4green.
    i quote you said. "Any one who give such a long review just to bash someone is truely ignorant."

    and what exactly are you doing? yours is like 5 miles long. if you got a problem with somebody elses review, let the author deal with it. so stupid and uptight.

    anyway, i wont bash this because i got the warnings. though i do suggest a beta.
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  • From ANON - Kitty4Green on January 05, 2007
    I was just reading the newest reviews and dare I say it....
    Lady Truth fuck off. Any one who give such a long review just to bash someone is truely ignorant. What makes me laugh is that she used a large vocabulary to make herself seem more intellegent.

    Oh and this line made me laugh histerically, and I quote: "What kind of repulsive, disturbed person thinks of a story like this?!?"

    ...um... didn't she read the warnings, the rating, or even the tittle...?
    Put it all together and even with a vague summary you can get the idea behind the story. People are stupid.

    Here's anouther one: Quoting again " The teachers would definitely not just sit and allow this to happen,..."

    If she had actually read the story and not stopped half way through it she would have found out the reason for the teacher and students lack of concern.

    Last thing. She called you disturbed... That's funny! She's reading an NC-17 story that's rated for it content telling the world that it is a MATURE story, and one that has such and extensive list of warnings on it.

    ...........something isn't right with that....
    My dear author ignore this imbecile's rant on your story. I appluad constructive critisism however, what she did showed nothing but ignorance and immaturity. Your story is a piece of art. Art is subjective and it is to be viewed (or in this case read) with an open mind. To do otherwise shows a blindness to reality and the world in general. Close-minded individuals are the reasons there is so much hate in the world...

    I am disgusted by close-minded individuals and therfore, LadyTruth you disgust me!
    My dear author I beg you to leave her comment up so that everyone can see her ignorance. Please don't give into her and stop this story. You're brilliant and though you may not write like JKR don't give up. After all "Professional Writers are only ametures that didn't give up!" (author unknown)

    Stay Cheery and ignore those who have and will flame you.
    Kitty4Green

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  • From ANON - Prieel on January 05, 2007
    OK, it's not like I'm not used to weird stuff, but this was a little bit too disturbing for me...
    I didn't really expect something that... O_o

    Gotta read it again, I guess :)
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  • From ANON - Sally on January 05, 2007
    Perhaps you should think about the reason for so many people writing this. I see you finally put N/C in your summary after deleting my review. Perhaps that will save you from flamers like me who just hate rapefics and would have never read this if you had put it in from the beginning. On the other hand... all the other things criticized still apply.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2007
    God...What does it say about people getting off on violence and rape???

    Sick, sick, sick!!!
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  • From ANON - Kitty4Green on January 05, 2007
    OMG! This story is awsome! I love the plot and the idea behind it, *sigh* if only there were more like this one around. I do agree that things are confusing in it though, BUT! if you haven't recieved an offer for a beta reader I would be happy to apply for the job!
    Im really good with detail and I could help you lessen the confusion that seems to be your main critisism. Over all I hope you update soon with or with out a beta! I really dont care but this is a story that must be continued.
    Oh and if people keep giving you crap about not warning about non-con and how "disturbing" it is, tell them to go and stuff it! lol If they cant properly read your warnings perhaps they shouldn't even be on this site.
    Anyway keep it up! I've read this thing over 4 times and counting I cant wait for more! Woot Send me an email if you consider my offer acceptible! ^_^
    BTW if you want to see the kind of stuff I write feel free to cheackout my profile at:
    http: //www .fanfiction.net/u/211850/
    *Just remove the spaces* lol
    update soon!
    Kitty4Green
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  • From ANON - Lady Truth on January 05, 2007
    This is by far the worst fic I have ever read! (And I have read many a fanfic.) It is horrible! You should seriously have warned readers that this story is so awful, that way no one is as shocked and sickened as I was!The plot is disgusting, the writing is atrocious and it is not even entertaining, in any way, whatsoever! The storyline is absolutely revolting! What kind of repulsive, disturbed person thinks of a story like this?!? And the worst part (almost, its hard to tell exactly which part is the worst because it is so horrifyingly deficient) is it is not even realistic! The teachers would definitely not just sit and allow this to happen, and furthermore, Harry would not be turned on by any of it! You should be ashamed that you wrote a story as nauseating as this! If I were you, I would not post another chapter, or any fic from your disturbed mind ever again! Overall, my analysis of this appalling fiction is it defies the laws of nature and reason with its dreadfulness. You suck! For the love of J.K Rowling, NEVER WRITE AGAIN!
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  • From ANON - Kitten on January 05, 2007
    It is very...different. Not in a bad way, just, different.
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  • From ANON - RentaiKitten on January 05, 2007
    I am sorry that you're getting such negative reviews. Please continue the story. If their complaint is spelling/grammar, I'd be willing to beta for you.
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  • From ANON - Jessie on January 05, 2007
    Dear gawd. That was the most disturbing thing I have ever read in my entire life. I loved it.
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