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Reviews for A Turn for the Better

By : Ms_Figg
  • From Moyra on June 19, 2008
    This morning I stumbled over this story by chance. I'm very happy I gave it a try, because it's so very intriguing, and a terrific read as well. Cleverly thought out, this two time lines, and it's adorable how you changed the main charas and some circumstances, but let ohters be as they were. Looking our for the next chap!
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 19, 2008
    BlackAsuka: You are so right. Snape was born in '61, not '60, so he would just have turned 17. I am going to have to rewrite the beginning scene and the scene where he leaves home. Thank you so much for pointing that out. ***
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  • From BlackAsuka on June 19, 2008
    I was slightly confused by the opening lines. I was under the assumption that the majority of seventh years were or became 17 in that year. Hermione turns 18 during 7th year due to the fact that she has a September (and therefore, late) birthday.
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  • From robotnik1985 on June 19, 2008
    MsFigg in her best I would say. This AU is a real fun. Please, keep writing so I could keep reading.All the best!
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 18, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.
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  • From Ms_Figg on June 18, 2008
    pittwitch: "A little basilisk?" lolololol. Oh, I feel out at that one!!! :::snorts::: Oh, that's funny!!!!
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  • From ANON - Hermione_shag69 on June 18, 2008
    waw I blood like thios chapter mate!!! keep writing!!! It would be great to know the end of the story!!!!
    please plase please its greeeeat!!! congratulations wow!!!!.
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  • From slygriff21 on June 18, 2008
    LOL. That was a hillarious chapter. I loved what Neville promised Ron. Typical guy mentality there. Thinking with their little head and not the big one. LOL.

    Tiff
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  • From pittwitch on June 18, 2008
    Whooooaaaa -- I think someone is going to need to shag Neville. Or, that maybe Neville will have to take one for the cause, you know, to keep Luna busy and out of the way. Seems like she wants a little basilisk to herself ;)
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  • From slygriff21 on June 17, 2008
    Great updates. I can't wait to read more!

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - LadyShiva on June 17, 2008
    Enjoying this immensely! I can't wait for an update!
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  • From ANON - cj on June 17, 2008
    Hello! Luv luv LUV the plotline here...I couldn't get enough!! I think you've managed where a lot of others have failed, to present an AU HP fanfic that reads so very believably! I'm a HUGE SSHG fan, but your intricate plotwork is truly amazing!

    If you would, please let me know when you update chapters, I can't wait to see what happens in the Chamber!!

    Also - I'm a huge Luna fan, and your portrayal of her is more what I thought she should be, i was disgusted at her portrayal in the OofP movie, and you've made me realize why I love her so dearly! She's got a lot going on in that head of hers...lol!

    thanks again for the great story!!

    cj
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  • From ANON - Cyador on June 17, 2008
    Love your story - please update soon!
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  • From slygriff21 on June 16, 2008
    How sneaky of Hermione, to trick Quirll like that. I can't wait to read more. Update soon.

    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2008
    I must say Ms_Figg, you are amazing! a sound trapping spell? so simple it's brilliant! i was wondering how you would get them into the chamber. won't Severus be angry if/when he finds out what she did?

    keep up the great work, i look forward to reading more! =)=)
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