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By : Ms_Figg
  • From JaceDamian23 on October 24, 2008

    It was after curfew, but Hermione needed to see professor Snape and see him tonight.

    you keep on mentioning harry has a head boy.....but isnt mione the head girl?
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 24, 2008
    though i cant believe that dumbledore or slughorn wasn't at the funeral. or any of the slytherins. lucius. ect.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 24, 2008
    awwww what a sad part hun. im so happy that your dumbledore chose servus, i would of chose remus though. i also dont believe that james deserves to be head boy. he is one of the jokers/pranksters/biggest bullies in school.

    btw you posted the same part in this story twice.....the dumbledore part.

    liked that tom went to servus's moms funeral..and wrapped his arm around servus, thats nice lol.


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  • From CB13 on October 24, 2008
    My dear,

    The riddle (get it??? Tom Rid - oh, never mind, of course you get it) part was a gas. If I'd laughed any harder I would have disturbed the kiddos.

    I'm so glad you're letting us see where this story goes. The first bit, going back in time and chaning things, was terrific; the second bit, the Potions apprenticeship, was well-done, and you could have ended it at either of these points. I always like to have things totally explained (like Bilbo Baggins, I suppose), so I'm delighted we get to see this H/S through to.... well, gosh, I don't know where yet, do I?

    Love

    Christina
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 23, 2008
    omg u better update REEEAALLLLLYYYY quickly cuz im dying to no wat happens next!
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  • From on October 23, 2008
    I hope poor Lucius is okay... *giggle* Fun chapter. That's a great deal of work to get to one's bride. Thanks for the update!
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 23, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From wishywashy on October 23, 2008
    i love this. and lucius was such a nice surprise at the end. its great to be reading neww chapters of this fic again. so different from many others and very well written.
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 23, 2008

    Snape looked at the stricken witch, pulled out his wand and did a reduction spell, making her teeth just a bit smaller than they were initially. She was no longer buck-toothed.

    "I see no difference, Miss Granger," he said coldly, then assigned Ron a detention and billowed off, Hermione feeling her teeth, then giving everyone around her a perfectly beautiful smile

    aww

    so nice

    btw didnt call you a bitch before.lily
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 23, 2008


    "And James Potter wasn't awful? His 'Marauders' weren't terrible? You always only saw what you wanted to see. The truth is James was worse than I was. He was a bully and a coward . . . you knew that. I was neither of those things, although I often withheld my hand at your request because they were your 'housemates.' What a fool I was," Snape retorted.

    Lily stared at Snape. He was so bitter. Maybe . . . maybe he had a right to be. She had never even considered his side of it. She didn't care to consider it back then. In fact, she wouldn't have given him another thought for the rest of her life if not for the fact Harry was in Slytherin, and he was the Head of House

    yup bitch snape is right...i love the maruders but they should of been slytherin. all but remus
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 23, 2008

    Hermione had thrown the doors open and asked if they had seen Neville's toad, then commented on Ron's poor spell work and told them her name. Harry scowled at her, thinking she looked like a chipmunk with those big front teeth, but reluctantly gave her his name. Ron did likewise. Then she left.

    "She's going to be a horror," Ron commented after the bossy little witch left. "Did you see her hair? What a mess!"

    Harry stuck out his front teeth and made chipmunk noises. Ron nearly fell apart with laughter.

    "Let's hope she doesn't bite," he quipped.


    "It's no wonder no one can stand her," he said to Dean Thomas as they pushed their way into the crowded corridor, "she's a nightmare, honestly."

    Neville had been walking behind them and frowned when suddenly someone knocked into him as they hurried past. He heard a small sob and saw it was Hermione. Now Neville really scowled and caught up to Ron.

    "Hermione heard you, you know," the Gryffindor said, "you made her cry."

    Ron shrugged carelessly and laughed, as did Dean.

    "So?" said Ron, grinning at Neville. "She must've noticed she's got no friends."

    "She does have friends. I'm her friend," Neville snarled at him.

    "That's probably why you're not so popular either," the redhead said, "Granger is a big, fat show-off and nobody likes her, including me. She tries to make everyone think she's smarter than real witches and wizards when she's only a bloody Mud
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  • From JaceDamian23 on October 23, 2008
    aww sucks mione and harry aren't friends.....i hope shes friends with ron still.
    weird that she doesn't seemto remember lmfao
    these stories, when they go back, they always DO remember..or at least the 100s I read. haha.
    interesting though



    The flicker became more solid, and the young wizard started slightly when he saw it appeared to be a witch
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  • From catysmom1028 on October 23, 2008
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Saria on October 22, 2008
    Thank you for updating so quickly! Keep it up, I really like how this story is turning out!
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  • From on October 21, 2008
    Fantastic updates! Thanks!
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