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Reviews for Hermione's Pleasure

By : FengWei
  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2007
    That made me more sick than two girls, one cup.
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on November 22, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on June 25, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 21, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Moca on January 12, 2007
    It needs more ... fill in more details..
    but keep trying .. the more you write the better you will get... believe ME (I got so many bad reviews on my stories)
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  • From ANON - Jamie M. on January 11, 2007
    What the F*** was that, like a really bad attempt at poetry? wow it is all i can say. your story came to me, looked interesting enough. i was wronged. yet i don't blame myself. for the author himself(herself) is the true villan. here is a huge hint...stick to a myspace blog for poetry, and leave the fanfic's to people who know how to write in complete thoughts/sentences.
    ~J.M.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    effing trash... what the hell??? even pwp has more plot then that... seriously you need to throw this out with you old milk!
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  • From FengWei on January 05, 2007
    I know I haven't elaborated enough. I know my punctuation/grammer is bad. I'll try a different one. Sorry guys.
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  • From ANON - Dorian on January 05, 2007
    Oh dear god.. my eyes, my eyes..
    I don't think I'll ever be able to write again.. you're insane lack of talent has poisoned me.

    Honestly, think it over once more.
    You need descriptions, plot, grammar, spelling..
    Try reading a book before posting, honestly.
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  • From ANON - Zyx on January 04, 2007
    This must be the worst crap that I've ever read,
    and seeing that I read what I write that's something :O
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  • From ANON - ROFL on January 04, 2007
    The next Chapter:

    "Hermione, you are so damn, fucking, bloody hot. I need you so much." He grabs her hips and pulls on them.

    "Oh, Harry. Yes, you can have me. Everything of me. You can even fuck me in the ass. I would love to do anal sex with you. Please fuck me hard. I need you so much."

    "Yeah, Hermione. I need you. Get naked. I have to fuck you. I want to be in your womb." He is helping her, to get her pants down. As she is naked, he puts his dick at her entrance. Her rear entrance. Hermione is wincing, as he is pushing all the way in. He needs only four trusts to come into her rectum. His sperm is dripping of her ass, as he pulls his dick out.

    "Thanks, that you were so fast. It hurts so much. Now you can lick my pussy, until I have my orgasm."

    "Of course, Mione. I will do everything for you. And it is even a dream of mine to lick your pussy." He positions himself on his knees and is turning her over. His nose makes contact with her clit and he starts to lick.

    TBC

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  • From ANON - Vegico on January 04, 2007
    Yo bro elaborate a bit more. You can't expect to actually get positive reviews on a short thing like this.
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