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Reviews for After Everything Thats Happened (Rewrite)

By : whereswaldo821

From angelnomiko on January 16, 2007
wow that was great i love to ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
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From hermioneandseverusfan82 on January 15, 2007
i hope you have hermione and severus only make love to each other and not have anyone else touch them. this is good story for your frist on this site.

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From ANON - amsev on January 14, 2007
I love MLC fics and this one promises to be a good one - bit of a cliffie there at the end of ch. 2 with Lucius showing up like that! I look forward to reading more.
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From ANON - Ava Allen on January 14, 2007
I love all stories about Marriage Law !!! Please...write more !!! :-)))
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From ANON - Lonne2 on January 14, 2007
I only got one thing to say:

MORE!
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From ANON - Darque Hart on January 05, 2007
Thank You :) :) :) Love MLC's!!!! You've started off on a different angle, hope to see more chapters up soon.
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From ANON - Emmylovedraco on January 05, 2007
I like it please update soon,
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From ANON - Bella Snape on January 05, 2007
This has an interesting start, although I don't see what's wrong with Lucius petitioning for her... this sounds cool though, I hope we get to see a bit of LM/HG as well though.
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From ANON - cearrae on January 04, 2007
Not a bad start, even if this is a well worn story line. Just a bit of criticism. For most readers of Fan Fiction, canon spelling is important. If you are using a spell check feature with auto correct, it will often make changes you don't want. For instance - Lucius Malfoy - you have spelt Lucius as Luscious. Now I agree he is quite Luscious to look at in the movies, it's not his name. One other mistake was descent instead of decent.

Not flaming you - just suggestions to improve your good writing.
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