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Reviews for Ghost of a Chance

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  • From ANON - Addie on January 08, 2007
    ahhh i like write more
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    Hi, I have a little of that constructive criticism. Where is the rest? Please update.
    Otherwise I'm just curious as to how Lucius knew about Harry.

    Well.. We'll see. Thanks and please update
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  • From ANON - kastra on January 06, 2007
    very nice. I look forwaed to the second chapter.
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  • From ANON - AislinnNicole on January 06, 2007
    I'm very intrigued and I can't wait to see what you do with this fic. I hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - Sphinx_of_old on January 05, 2007
    This is a very good story i like the new orgional touch of a Dom/Sub relationship. a master and servent now why didn't i think of that....oh well keep up the good work i'd like to read more. if you've got a mailing list add me please i'll be found at...

    jennirosebud2007@yahoo.com
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  • From ANON - Squall-sama on January 05, 2007
    DOHMYGOD!!!! Why--why'd you have to stop it THERE!?!?! >.< Wow, just the first chapter and it's already amazing! This really leads me to wonder where exactly you're going to take it. Voldemort isn't alive, the war is over, Harry is graduated... Hmmm... I'm interested to see what sort of conflic/plot you'll be coming up with! Excelent writing, love the fic so far, can't WAIT for more!
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on January 05, 2007
    This is great.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - mandy on January 05, 2007
    i love it cant wait to read more!!
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  • From ANON - Shauna on January 05, 2007
    Good story. Write some more.
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  • From ANON - Sophia on January 05, 2007
    I really like what I've read so far. I can't wait to see Snape's reaction when he finds out who Amateo really is. Excellent work!!
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  • From ANON - Asta on January 05, 2007
    Interesting start! I like it that your Snape isn't fluffy or saccharine as happens so often with this kind of plot but still sharp, private, temperamental and domineering as we see him in the books. That he doesn't spend his time pining away for the supposedly missing Potter after they reached an accord during the war or already being in love with Potter's new identity is also a good thing imo: in scenarios as this I find it much more likely and realistic when men (especially guarded ones as Snape!) fall in lust long before anything else ^_^

    One mistake imo: you're mentioning Snape's "teacher salary" - however in the course of the chapter it's rather clear that Severus isn't teaching anymore post-war but spends his days all at his home brewing for a living.
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  • From ANON - lilith on January 05, 2007
    Brilliant! I hope you write more soon!
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  • From ANON - Hambares on January 05, 2007
    Please update soon. This iseems so heartwrenching. Happy ending?
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  • From ANON - Snarry Lover on January 05, 2007
    i am already in love with this story. i really hope you continue with it. this story is absolutely gripping and i cannot wait for more *gets down on hands and knees and begs*. excellent work, cheers!
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  • From ANON - Ann on January 05, 2007
    Nice first chapter. I loved the length of the chapter. Please continue.

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