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Reviews for Believe me

By : SlashKat
  • From Carmeleyes23 on October 11, 2008
    WOW...I just found this..and i thought it was wonderful. Harry opening up to Sev through song...Beautiful...i teared up some
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  • From Makovaso on July 26, 2007
    please update!!!!!!!!!
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  • From SlashKat on January 08, 2007
    checking reviews-thanks to everyone
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 07, 2007
    This story is lovely. I hope you up date soon.

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  • From SlashKat on January 07, 2007
    do i really have harrys eyebrows sneering? *must read work* and i do use updated spelling and grammar check and haven't found anything. characterisation wise it's just an easy read-not trying to be great literature. thanks to all reviewers, will update tomorrow.
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  • From SlashKat on January 07, 2007
    i have no idea how else to look at my review so im gonna have to post here. thanks to the 3 reviewers i already have
    Kat
    x
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  • From ANON - renga on January 07, 2007
    interessting beginning, hope you update soon
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  • From ANON - momoko on January 06, 2007
    good story
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  • From ANON - Asta on January 06, 2007
    Oh dear! That must have been an awful spell that turned Snape into a vapid 13 year old girl for the duration of this story! The poor man - losing all dignity, personality and intelligence this way...

    You should really invest in several betas for spelling, grammar and general writing, even leaving aside the matter of IC-characterization. Paragraphs and punctuation are also your friends and even more your readers!
    You often use words wrongly and totally out of context. For instance: "sneer" which you have Harry's eyebrows (!) doing which is impossible since "to sneer" means "a derisive smile or remark" and eyebrows can neither smile nor say something... There are lots of mistakes like this.
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