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Reviews for Harry Potter and The Bound Prince (BP1)

By : slashpervert
  • From ANON - RabidSqurl on January 07, 2007
    Ooh la la. :o They sure got down to business in chapter 2! Very nice. ^^

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  • From ANON - Yana on January 07, 2007
    i hope Draco is ok
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  • From ANON - Kermit on January 07, 2007
    Can't wait for more!!!!
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  • From ANON - Minue on January 07, 2007
    Great story so far.

    A little nit pick: In chapter 2 you wrote 'He buried his face into the soft flesh of Malfoy's neck and sucked, and kissed, and nibbled. Holy fucking hell it felt so good!

    Draco gasped when Harry broke the kiss, taking deep lungfuls of air and moaning when Draco started doing amazing things to his neck. One hand was buried in Harry's hair, not controlling but loving the feel of its thickness between his fingers. He couldn't believe this was really happening.'

    Don't you mean: 'when HARRY started to do amazing things to his neck'?

    Otherwise, I didn't find any mistake, and since I am a great nit-picker, that's saying something. I think the bathroom scene was one of the best scenes in the book, and it's great what you made of it! Please continue soon.
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  • From ANON - YamiBakura on January 07, 2007
    Chapter 2

    Why is Draco dying? What's going on? I'd really love to see more! Update soon?
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