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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : xsexxandxcandyx
  • From ANON - Tjay Motou on January 07, 2007
    Okay... the fic and plot are good.. the grammar isn't... I suggest you get a beta... or edit it yourself... it will make the flow better... and to be honest.. I like the plot you have so far... Ron being abusive and with her thinking she deserved it... there are too many women in this position and it's nice to read someone using this plot and writing it out correctly... (most get the woman's stand on this completely wrong! but you... you got it bang on!) Good Job!
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  • From ANON - Emma Smith on January 07, 2007
    Hey love this chapter, can Draco see through her glamer? Hope to read more soon!
    The link for my story is http://hp.adultfanfiction.net/story.php?no=600007089 "Darkness that Consumes"

    Emma
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  • From ANON - Magical Heather on January 07, 2007
    2 chapters in one night YAY!!!!!!!!!!! What is Ron going to do now, he is not going to have as much access to Hermione?? And Malfoy he is really being a stuid git right now
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  • From ANON - sweet asphodel on January 07, 2007
    This is an intriguing story, that is generally well written. However, and this may just be me being too uptight, it really annoys me that there is no space after the commas and periods. Please don't consider this to be a negative comment, as I believe this to be a worthy story and I do look forward to seeing more of this story and more from you. Take care and happy writing.
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  • From ANON - sticky on January 07, 2007
    I'm LOVING this story so far! I've never read a story where Ron was abusive. It's so interesting! I hope Draco will save her from Ron; (I don't like him) that would be so sweet! Please update soon. I have to know what's going to happen. How's Ron gonna react once they're alone?
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  • From ANON - angel on January 07, 2007
    man.. i hope some helps her out soon .. please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - magical Heather on January 07, 2007
    WOW someone needs to kick his ass. Cant wait for more!!!
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  • From ANON - Lux on January 07, 2007
    i thought you were against
    me making ron bad
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  • From ANON - skye on January 07, 2007
    A "classic" theme but nicely filled out. *tosses an apple to the plot bunny*
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  • From ANON - Emma Smith on January 07, 2007
    Hey love the fic so far vert good I actuall have a fic thats alot like this, Any way please keep writing!
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