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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : xsexxandxcandyx
  • From DisabledCloudFlyer on July 07, 2007
    I love your story. It is kind of over the top at times. And at other times it seems to not quite reach the top. I think you should work on your emotions. I know what I am suposed to be feeling when I read your story dear. But, I feel mostly like I want to create more drama just because I see where there can be more to create. All in all though, I love reading this story and I look for new updates every day. I am sorry I haven't revieved before now but I am new to the site and just now found the link. Please bring in more Ron/Hermione action if it fits your story layout. I would really like to see more of Hermione gaining confidence against Ron. As to what Ron does about that...I'll leave that up to you.
    Happy writings dear,
    moi
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  • From princesspeach on July 07, 2007
    Aww Draco and Hermione were being so cute at the beginning of this chapter!! Of course it is D&H so obviously they had to go and screw it up, but that is why we love them :) Can't wait until the next chapter, and for Ron to get his ass kicked, muahaha.
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  • From ANON - Emma on July 06, 2007
    this has been driving me mental

    there is no 'e' in stomach
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  • From ANON - Sheri on July 06, 2007
    No. . . I want to finish it. . . I started it all today and can't wait for the next chapter. .. so cruel. . . lol. . . Good, actually great story, don't change a thing. . . expect to write more. Surprisingly this is the first D/H story I ever read. . . I love them now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From DestroyerEksie on July 05, 2007
    I love this story! The plot is beautiful, I've never really read one as well written as this. So much fluff, makes me feel all warm inside.
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  • From Elanor on July 04, 2007
    I am still in the process of reading, but I wanted to let you know that so far, I think this story is great! I like the detail, and how I can feel the character's emotions. Great work! And now, I'll continue my reading!
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  • From Kilalla on June 28, 2007
    so i finally got around to getting caught up with this story... i really like it alot. I'm so glad harry finally came to his senses. Will Ron's actions couse his true nature to be seen?

    oh i am so excited ffor your next update!
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  • From ANON - myangel113 on June 28, 2007
    I just finished reading all 22 chapters and it was, simply put, amazing.
    You have a few grammer and spelling errors here and there but nothing major.
    I like how you made Hermione and Draco friends instead of just straight lovers, even though it is posted on an adult site.
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  • From ANON - melanie on June 26, 2007
    It's ok... i mean, all the characters are horribly OOC... Ron would never do that, and if he did, harry would certainly never believe him. mostly i think it's just that draco and hermione would never act that way with each other, even if ron was an ass like that. otherwise, it's an ok read. but you should really get yourself a beta, hun, to help you with your spelling and grammar. :)
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  • From ANON - pickles87 on June 26, 2007
    Thank you for the new chapter.
    About time Harry came to his senses.
    Mmm wonder what Ronniekins will be feeling when he's replaced by Draco.
    Nice they both had a good sleep.
    Are you done with the next chapter?
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  • From ANON - dee on June 26, 2007
    thx.
    :)
    so far so good!
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  • From luvhp on June 26, 2007
    MMm, what anice way to wake up, wrapped in Draco's arms. :)
    Good for Draco for sticking up for hermione to Blaise. And yeah for Harry realizing what a foul git Ron is being.
    I think the biggest problem with reviews around this place is not knowing when there's an update, I'm somewhat new around here and haven't figured out how to 'subscribe' to a story so I can read the updates as soon as they come out, my favorites folder is overflowing with HP fiction (I'm an addict, I know it)

    Please come back soon, I really, really, REALLY want some Hr/D action!!!
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  • From CetteFille on June 26, 2007
    I love this fic SO much... but when does Hermione get it together and figure out that she loves Draco?

    CetteFille
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  • From ANON - TiffANY on June 26, 2007
    Hi

    I really like this story but in the last couple of chapters I noticed some mistakes in grammar and spelling e.g. you kept writing 'him' instead of 'her' in chapter 23

    But apart from that I really like this story so well done and I can't wait to read more, so please UPDATE!

    Love TiffANY : )
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  • From AriaErna on June 26, 2007
    very good! eager to find out what happons! update soon!
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