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Reviews for Stolen Innocence

By : xsexxandxcandyx
  • From alick on February 05, 2007
    yeah i gree with you. now did ron see draco or somthing ???? it just is unlike him to hold his anger now. well anyways i write stories of my own you should take a look no harry potter ones but i plan on writing some anyways you should take a look ks i would love to know what another witter thinks
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  • From Lilum on February 05, 2007
    Yay Hermione for being strong! *happy dance*
    But I won't be mad at Harry...I can understand why he'd take Ron's side...
    Eep! Can't wait for next chapter!!
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  • From angelnomiko on February 05, 2007
    man .. he did take that better then i thought ... she should tell harry .. i hope ron does not do something bad to her later ... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From Tjay on February 05, 2007
    Another Great Chapter. I seriously can not say enough good things about this fic! Finally Hermonie broke up with Ron... but you just know that something bad is going to happen... Ron took it just a little to well... something is going to happen, you know it will... and I hope Draco will be there for Hermoine when she needs him. I cannot wait to read more, I'm soo glad you update up so often cuz, honey, you got me hooked... and good job with the spelling and grammar, I noticed nothing out of place... I'm impressed. I'm glad I could help! (I'm always willing to help)
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  • From ANON - Tracy on February 02, 2007
    what a great story. it is so close 2 real life it is quite scary. as i had a friend who went through the abusive stuff so well done for getting so realisic. please keep up the brillant writing.
    tracy
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  • From magicalheather999 on February 02, 2007
    Hopefully she fully breaks through this time and does something to help herself. I cant wait for more
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  • From on February 02, 2007
    ugh an evil cliffhanger. more please
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  • From on February 01, 2007
    Oh wow...another wonderful update. I'm so happy that Draco go through to her. i think that Harry should be told something. Maybe if Harry knows whats been happening to Hermione she can have him as another protector. She needs all the love and suport she can get.
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  • From Tjay on February 01, 2007
    I know I reviewed already... but i just noticed a grammar error... you are switching back and forth between future tense, present tense and past tense...

    you have (incorrect): "Draco smiled, wrapping his arms around..."

    you should have: "Draco smiled and wrapped his arms around..."

    smiled is past tense, wrapping is present tense... try to keep past tense with past tense and keep present tense with present tense... (same goes for future tense)
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  • From pickles87 on February 01, 2007
    Why do I have this awlful feeling that Ron is going to show up and have a big nasty fit? Or are you going to be very nice and let her not see him til breakfast at the great hall... please.......... She needs a tiny break.
    Good story. waiting for more.
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  • From Tjay on February 01, 2007
    I can not say enough good things about this fic... I just can't! I seriously love it! sometimes it takes someone being brutally honest like Draco was for them to see the truth... and sometimes it doesn't work.... and in those cases.... bad things happen. But wonferful chapter! You've kept everyone in character but also got passed the first step in getting Hermoine out of that relationship. I only hope that you contiune to keep everyone in character because this type of thing is happeneing to real women and this is somehting people need to read... maybe then they might see the warning signs of abuse when it happens to someone they know. I love this fic, please keep writing.
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  • From angelnomiko on February 01, 2007
    wow .. i hope now she will let draco stand up for her and keep her safe .... please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ANON - alice on February 01, 2007
    good story i kinda want to know what ron told him though and why not cover it up it would be simpler any ways ypu should relook over it thier was some tyeos
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  • From Lilum on February 01, 2007
    *applause*
    You did very well with portraying Hermione as an abused and battered woman. Very realistic indeed.
    And was that comment about Harry becoming abusive foreshadowing a bit?? lol. *(I hope not)* Unless, of course, it's toward Ron...which isn't likely if Ron's side of the story is the only one he'll here. Hopefully though, Draco will get Hermione opened up enough and get her to voice her problems to Harry...Then both Draco and Harry can open up a case of whoop-ass on Ron! Yeah!

    ....wait...what? Ok, I'm done babbling now..

    Who's ready for a new chapter...ME!!

    Ok, seriously though, I'll shut up now.
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  • From EmmaSmith on February 01, 2007
    Thanks for the review and I love your new chapter to. Your a sweetheart update soon.

    Love Emma
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