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By : TomFeltonIsKindaHot
  • From jamieblye on April 11, 2007
    I just found this story and spent hours catching up. I love it- it's wonderful. I did HATE Blaise and Hermione sex after she and Draco broke up, especially after Draco didn't have sex with anyone else, but I'll just ignore that chapter and move on. :) Other than that, I love the plot, the characterizations, everything and can't wait until you update again! Hurry back!!
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  • From Frkjensen7400 on April 09, 2007
    I've just finished first chapter, and I like the story sofare... Looking forward to the next 15 chapters... ^_^
    You are a very good writer!
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  • From ANON - Jess on April 08, 2007
    Fantastic! Keep up the great work, can't wait to be reading more of this great fic.

    Jess
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  • From ANON - molly on April 05, 2007
    I'm sure everyone's told you this, but this is an amazing story! Like, really. Every now and again I'll come across a book that I just can't put down because it's that good, and I have been reading this story for the past couple hours. It's just so weird seeing someone who isn' J.K. writing in the same way but twisting it around so that it's not all about Harry. Personally, I love Hermione, she's my favorite character, and I think do you an exceptionally good job portraying her. I can hear what she's saying in my head, and Malfoy. The story is very well written, and the dialouge is just as amazing. You have to keep writing. For the world's sake, because we need more people who can truly write like this, who can write perfect parts for characters that didn't come from her own mind.

    Love much much,
    Molly
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  • From ANON - lol on April 04, 2007
    This story is really really good. i cant wait for you to update...its just awesome ^_^
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  • From notthyfriend on April 04, 2007
    Man, I am so glad this is finally up! "Did they get Arts & Crafts time?" I love the nervous habit you've given her. Don't take this as a criticism, because I understand its importance to the story, but Harry bothers me. Why should it be any business of his who Hermione shags? Not as if he or Ron waited for her permission. I keep waiting for her to tell Harry off for ever telling her she had to choose between him and Draco. If it happens, it'll be a real awakening for them both... Now, as a writer myself, I know how much everyone hates this particular advice, but it's true nonetheless: you really need a better beta, assuming you use one. I really like this story, but the errors are distracting. I hope I haven't tripped over my words and upset you again, because I truly LOVE reading this.
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  • From ANON - Madeleine on April 03, 2007
    I am sooo freaking mad at you. If there is something I hate it is betrayal, and you have had so much of it in this god forsaken, brilliant, amazing, well written, cry making story. Do you know I was pissed of enough to cry because they did not tell her. I hate it, cuz she has been with them from the beginning and they should know her well enough to trust her with something like this. I got completely absorbed by your story and I read all the chapters in one sitting and it is very late at night here in Sweden, which is why I probably will be rereading the last couple of chapters, but so far so good, and please, please, please, make them get back together and have a happy ending.

    I am sorry for rambling on a bit but over all this is a really good story, just remember to do what is best for the story because at this point you could go either way. either you have one or two (possibly 3-5) more plot twists and then end it in a way you like or you will have ten more twists which will be about 20-40 more chapters and become utterly horrendous.

    Once again, I love this story and the passion between Mione and Draco, keep on writing the same way, or improve, whatever tickles your pear.
    All the way from Sweden, Madeleine

    PS. I apologise if i offended you in any way, i just usually write whatever comes to mind at the time of the review, but i never meant to.
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  • From xsexxandxcandyx on April 02, 2007
    Great chapter.
    Loved all the emotions.
    Interesting ways for the trio to reduce their stress.
    Did Ron && Harry have a quickie in the shower before they went to the library ?
    I can't wait for Hermione to break && get back together with Draco.
    It's so obvious it'll happen which is what I like.
    Your chapters just seem to get better && better.
    You are truly an amazing writer.
    Please update soon,
    I'm dying for more.

    Much Love...
    XXX
    Xx-.k.a.y.y.-xX
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  • From redheadfaerie on April 02, 2007
    Another fantasmic chapter. Yeah, I'd be pissed as fuck as well. We'll see how long she can keep up with that whole detached, not caring thing.
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  • From ANON - sharon on April 01, 2007
    ahh! its so good. i absolutely love your story, and you have are a really good writer, there's not sudden action thats unexplainable or plot holes, or ridiculious banter that i can't follow. and its not really cliche. so i love it, and i wait and wait for you to update. ugh. i hate waiting for updates, i should just start reading complete stories...but i hate it when stories end...boo...
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  • From ANON - Prufrockgirl on March 31, 2007
    whoa, After the first paragraph or so I actually had to double check that I had clicked on the right story....But I like this new direction. I kind of wish that Hermione had been harder on Draco, but I also get why you had her not talk to him at all....well, think the way this story is turning shows a lot of promise. Please keep it up, even if it takes you a bit of time for each chapter. I'm excited to see what will happen, as well as for the (I'm sure not only hopefully) return of lemons.
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on March 31, 2007
    YAY! So happy for the update. I can't wait to see Draco and Hermione interact (no, not another word for sex!) again!
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  • From ANON - Liz on March 31, 2007
    I really liked how you worked in HBP details into the plot; and how Hermione reacted!
    Good chapter.
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  • From skydancer on March 31, 2007
    hiya,
    WOW!! that was a bitchin' chappie!!! loved the Boggart and hope it plays a fun bit later on. My only critic is a small spelling booboo...Cruse instead of Curse. Its the same all through the chapter ( I spell "the" as teh ALL the time...my fingers just go that way!


    Sky
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  • From ANON - lola on March 30, 2007
    OMFG!! this is the first time I leave you a review, but I check almost every day for an update of your story, I think this is one of the most original and good DMHG stories out there, I love how you go directly to the point of the story, and don't include things that are not necessary for the story. I must confess I was dissapointed that in this chapter there wasn't enough fluff or smut XD...but I completely understand this chapter had to be done, I love how you did the transition, I hate when authors entertain themselves with useless chapters describing scenes that do nothing to the plot or the story, so the phrase "8 months" was a bliss for me, I did't have to read something boring and could read about draco and hermione's reunion just then and there how I wanted. I also love how you have maintained them in character, no emo draco, or slutty hermione; the way you write is amazing, I can imagine perfectly each and every scene, and emphatize with the character's feelings....please, please continue this story, never stop until you finish!!! =)
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