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By : TomFeltonIsKindaHot
  • From Ravensblood on January 24, 2007
    I absolutely love where this is going so far. Sorry I don't have more for you, besides a comment about your technique in using the contrasts between the two of them to mark every chapter. Love your blatant use of cliche's and the fact that you explain draco's "okay"-ness about doing naughty things with a mudblood, not with love and transformation, but with just plain horny-ness. Dear god, don't ever let them fall in love. Your story is wonderful without the WAFF.

    Keep it coming!
    p.s. Is Hermione a virgin? I tend to think she is but how far has our gryffindor princess gone?
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  • From Yanafava on January 23, 2007
    Absolutely beautiful!
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  • From HildaMalfoy on January 20, 2007
    The ending of the chapter was a bit unreasonable. why did Draco try to get her spirits down? Didn't he fear that he wouldn't get any from her if he does so?
    Update soon...
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  • From magicalheather999 on January 18, 2007
    Water? Damn I could use a drink after that. Great Lemons. She has a right to be pissed he was uncalled for. Cant wait for more.
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  • From shelagh on January 18, 2007
    Execellent! Please update soon.
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  • From erisnymph on January 17, 2007
    'Tis Jenn here, my dear. By the time I got back online to check stuff, you had posted two chapters.

    *still fanning herself*

    Good lordy, I wasn't expecting those and god, I love foreplay fics. :) PWPs are all well and good, but a wam-bam-thank-you-ma'am is sometimes as unsatisfying in fic as real life. I'm a little surprised at Hermione's worldly ways, but who am I to complain at this point?

    I'm fascinated by the Malfoy you've created. In the beginning of the fic, he was still an arrogant little bastard, but it was more friendly "I'm so used to being an ass I can't help it" banter than true cruelty. He's getting harsher as we go and I'm sure it has to do with his emotional issues, but maybe you could play it up a little more when attached to his emotional outbursts, lust included. Guys are less emotional post-orgasm than before, so maybe cruel remarks come before the fun...

    Harry and Ron... I'm dying to know what's going on with them. What exactly is Hermione observing? There's definitely an undercurrent that better become clear later. :) Finally, awesome cliff-hanger... but you've had me hanging on since the beginning. Well-done!
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  • From Stormyteacup on January 16, 2007
    BRILLIANT!!! I love it, i love their passion, i love your writing, i love you! Theres just too much loving about now....im going to have a lie down...
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  • From ANON - sheedy on January 13, 2007
    Wow awesome job! I love the easy flow you have when you write. I wish I could do that. Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Helen on January 13, 2007
    I think that your third chapter is the best one yet. Draco's perspective is always hard to write from because the books never give you much information about his character except for the Draco-bashing that Harry, Ron, and often Hermione always give him (which is usually much warrented). However, you really nailed this one. The third chapter is very enlightening as to what is going on with Draco, and it makes the whole plot a lot easier to understand. My personal opinion is that your description of Narcissa is very accurate, and much more realistic. I do have to ask, though, does this plot end up with Draco and Hermione together, or is it an amicable (or not amicable) parting of ways?
    Keep those wonderful installments coming! I can't wait to read the next one as you always leave us wanting more!
    -Helen
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  • From ANON - Jayna on January 13, 2007
    I LOVE IT!! loved the relationship between them!! more soon

    Jayna
    xxx
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 13, 2007
    aaaaaaah What a great chapter! I wonder of Harry did notive those two "little" things! This chapter had a lot of funny elements and you did a good job on the smut. A few things: I can't believe Hermione would just stand for Draco's emotionally manipulative games like that. How can she get with him after he's spouting such b.s.? She obviously knows he's kidding but still. And after their little "session", Draco got no love, so to speak. I can't imagine he was okay with that. She didn't even touch him! And he doesn't seem like the all give, no take kind of guy. Just my few thoughts. Man, he's got it bad!

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  • From ANON - jenny on January 13, 2007
    wow, great story. update soon. i hope you won't really make harry and ron gay though. not that i have anything against it- my best friend is gay.
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  • From ANON - skye on January 13, 2007
    "a...

    few...

    words."

    lol..you did ask...

    major hottness in this chappie! great for chilly evenings! Skye
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  • From ANON - Know-it-all on January 12, 2007
    That chapter was great! I loved the ending!
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  • From ANON - Avanell on January 12, 2007
    Oh, yes! That was worth it alright! Loved it!
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