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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From Larrabee on July 22, 2008
    Ch. 13- I pronouce it Loo'-see-us.
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 11, 2008
    This was a really great story to read! I love how you write and you included some really nice details that I found great. For example your reason why Hermione could not accio muggel objects or the thing with the latent electricity!

    Well, I for sure will check out your profile here and start to read your other storys. Thanks for a few really nice evenings I spend reading your story...

    Sabine
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on July 05, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 28, 2008
    I just have one word for you; Naaaaaw :) What a sweet ending! Why can't I write good endings like that? Ah, I know, know... practise, practise... ah, well. I really liked this story. Apart from the iPods. I guess this story takes place in the 21 century, so they are invented but... Hermione and iPod... It just doesn't match in my mind! In my world, only brats (annoying rich people, I don't know if you can say it in english) has iPods, so I wouldn't be suprised if Draco turned up with one but... Hermione? Ah, well, perhaps iPods aren't as expencive in US and England like they are here...
    Oh, and I missed Draco. Not that I'm a Draco-fan, but I would just like to see what would have happend if Draco showed up. I'm sure he would have a lot of things to say :P
    But other than that, I really liked the story. Especially the part with Lucius-soul-quest of what you should call it (Lucius Reborn...) that was very interesting to read... And I think it was good that he made up with his past.
    Thanks for a good story! Now I will run over to the other story, new chapter! Yay!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 25, 2008
    Hm... Hi... again. About the Nirvana thingy, I read some more about it, just to make sure I wasn't fooling you. And I was right... but some pages says there is other defintions of the word, even if it really means "to cease blowing". I don't know if you care about this :P I just want to... I don't know what I want... Ah, well, perhaps you can use it as a synosym for climax... because it also said that Nirvana is "the perfect peace of the mind that is free from craving, anger and other afflictive states" which you can say a climax is... I think... I should stop talking now, I really should.
    Oh, perhaps I'm just old fashion and the name have a totaly knew meaning... And I shouldn't bother you about it... I should just ask someone older and wiser than me... Yep... ah, hopefully you have got something to smile at!
    I'll be quiet now.
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 25, 2008
    Chapter 27 (I realised you have no idea what chapter I have been reading... ah, well, now you know)
    Oh, so THATS what Dominatrix means. I wasn't sure. Hm... Wait... so did that guy give me a compliment or... Ah, who cares.
    Ah, but I notice you make a tiny little mistake in your story (I don't know if someone else has pointed it out for you by now... in that case, never mind), but you use the word "nirvana" like it's a synonym of climax. Which it's not. Nirvana is the opposite of a climax. But this is a very common mistake. To reach nirvana is the goal in Buddhism, to reach Brahman is the goal in Hinduism. Brahman is like a climax, you become a part of everything, Brahman is the world spirit in Hindusim.
    Nirvana on the other hand means that you sees to exist, you disapear... it's like blowing out a candle... you die and become nothing. It's a bit weird for people our culture to understand why someone would want that, but in Buddhism, it's the ultimate goal. To just disapear and never ever come back again. You don't have a soul in Buddhism, it's all Karma and... gha, I'm rambling. Sorry. I'm not saying you can't use the word (everyone will think you mean climax, so that's doesn't matter), but it's just a silly little misunderstanding.
    I hope you don't take my little lecture the wrong way, I think you are a wonderful writer and now I will contiue to read!!!
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  • From TheLadyMiya on June 22, 2008
    Hehe, yep, I'm reading this story too know... ah, well, only wanted to say that I enjoyed Lucius getting analsex :) It was funny and unexpected!
    AH, well, will contiue to read now!
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  • From ANON - AJlove on May 31, 2008
    What a great story!!! I LOVED how they were antagonizing each other and the dynamics you write them with.. Brilliant! The idea of Lucius going to a Muggle club and dressing like that left me panting (as did all the lemons with him involved.. lol) and I LOVED your integration of that Ricky/Christina song. I LOVE that song!!! I do have to admit to being scared that he was going to leave her forever after Chloe was born. (a really good friend of mine named her first daughter Chloe) The Quidditch Pitch wedding was SO SWEET!!! (but don't tell Lucius I called him sweet.. lol)

    Great story! You are an extremely talented writer!
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  • From ANON - Josie on May 24, 2008
    BLAH I've now read 2 of your stories and NEVER reviewed. It's too hard! My fingers ache! Lol.
    This was a fantastic story. You're the best Lucius/Hermione author I've ever had the pleasure of reading a fic from. Soo, on to the next one!
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  • From ANON - angel on May 02, 2008
    it is the best story i have read in a long time. you should write novels. you could make a killing at love novels.
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  • From tsorg on April 26, 2008
    Oh my God, what an incredible writer you are. I've read everything you have posted in AFF at least two to three times. I wanted to tell you how much enjoyment I have gotten from your wonderful stories. Thank you so very much and I look forward to what you will create in the future!
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  • From ANON - Shetan on April 06, 2008
    I thoroughly enjoyed your portrayal of Lucius and Hermione in "The Wedding"
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  • From goofball on March 02, 2008
    "He was nervous enough about her craving for chocolate frogs dipped in butterbeer." Yuck! Thank you so much for this image! ;o)
    I can't quite understand, why Hermione and Ginny are so reluctant to talk with each other. I mean, aren't they friends? Friends do share intimate things, no? But maybe that's another BDSM-thing which I think is totally normal to everyone and in fact it's not; to talk about almost everything and especially about sexuality.
    Anyway, still like the story - a lot! :o)
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  • From goofball on March 02, 2008
    Forgot it in the last chapter but I do love the berkers and the Barbie Queue *g*
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  • From goofball on March 02, 2008
    Well, ain't that funny? I'm really loving this story and don't mind the kink at all (oh no!). But what threw me totally off in this chapter (Liquid Lunch) was, Hermione and Ginny drinking so much wine (three bottles?). It's not like they're still 17, is it? It just somehow didn't seem to be - them. I don't know... mybe it's simply because I don't drink alcohol at all. Anyway, I hope you got the hidden message: I do love the story! :o)
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