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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ANON - LustBlood on June 19, 2007
    LaBib... I really like your writing, I've read all your stories and have enjoyed them immensely. This story has been very enjoyable to read, and I think you did a great job overall. I always love how you represent Luscius.. cold hot bastard who develops a heart.

    That being said, towards the end of this story, I found I could not appreciate Luscius reconciling himself with his evil. In my opinion - and this is just my very humble opinion - I think it's better to just leave out Luscius dealing with his inner demons. Because when you bring those up, you remind the reader he is in fact a murderer who has killed many innocent people for all the wrong reasons... and seriously, it's just impossible to forgive that and reconcile. I know this is just fantasy fiction, and so glazing over his past in the intro helps the reader block it out, but bringing it back to the limelight, for me, reminds me that his crimes are unpardonable.

    Sorry, I don't mean to come across as critical. You know I love all your work, and this story is still great too. Have enjoyed every single chapter, and always look forward to reading more from you.
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  • From ANON - kristi on June 19, 2007
    Wow. What an awesome chapter. I thought Lucius was sexy and hot before but after this chapter I'm overwhelmed. Wooh! Too bad it's fiction! Excellent chapter...I'm glad he finally got his act together. Can't wait to see where else you go with this and I'm looking forward to more stories from you!
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  • From on June 19, 2007
    Hermione truly is a saint! I wonder how long it will be before we get a steamy broom sex scene (strongly hinting here) *wink* This chapter was so very perfect! Please don't make me wait to long for more :)
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  • From catysmom1028 on June 19, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 19, 2007
    Hey!

    I know I've not written for a loooooong time and I'm really sorry about that, but with my oral exams approaching and havng to study a lot I only just managed to read the story and not review...so I'm doing now...

    I can't even remember when I've written the last revie (shame on me), but all the chapters are great - as always...:)
    You gave me quite the shock when you let Lucius disappear right after Hermione gave birth, but you definitely made up for that...!

    Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter and the new, and much more tender Lucius...:D

    I promise to review the following chapters right after reading them, now that I passed all of my exams and finally graduated...

    xox,
    Jenn
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  • From willowgirl on June 19, 2007
    Daddy is home! I'm so happy for them. Lucius is being such a sweetie(oh, sorry he doesn't like being called sweet).
    I hope your story isn't going to end now. I know all good things must come to an end, but I love this story so much. If you must end it please tell me you have another Lucius and Hermione fic in the works.
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  • From DB1 on June 19, 2007
    @42. yay hes back. awesome story!! Updtae soon

    *DB*
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  • From sheherazade on June 19, 2007
    Oh, hurrah, I'm delighted you haven't kept us waiting too long for news of Lucius in the wilderness and poor post-partum Hermione.

    It's good that he's finally understood how unacceptable his Death Eater past was - he couldn't keep it in his secret mental hideyhole forever, after all.

    Hermione is so pleased to see skinny Lucius - LMAO at the part of him that hasn't lost weight - great minds!

    So now they can face the future as a fully functioning family unit; Lucius has dealt with his demons, Hermione has recovered from giving birth in super-quick time and Chloe is thriving, yay. And they can play Quidditch any time they like as well.

    What could come next? Baby Snapes?
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  • From misslala on June 18, 2007
    I am happy for Lucius taming some of his demons. It makes me all warm and fuzzy inside :) I can't wait for the next installment! :)
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  • From ladyravenna on June 18, 2007
    LOL. I can see Lucius breeding a whole new Quiddich team.
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  • From firewall on June 18, 2007
    lol What a little brat you are!! That was fantastic. Poor Lucius...a baby will do that to you and I sympathize with him; however, poor Hermione! I hope the house elves will give her a hand.
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  • From ANON - Wilson on June 18, 2007
    Congratulations...this totally had me in tears...thank god I'm not a work!! I'm not sure what I can say to motivate you to write the next chapter just a wee bit faster but I'll give it try.....GROVELGROVELGROVELPLEADBEG
    WHINEGROVELBEGBEGBEG!!!!!! Ahem...now that my dignity has been destroyed....keep up the great work. And if you haven't guess already..i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From Citten on June 18, 2007
    well i do hope the month does not go too quickly i would like to see how they ALL respond to this. and i would love to see how chole looks and grows. well i do hope that you will write us soooooooooon and let us all know and to help our coursity! :)
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on June 17, 2007
    Cool as! I love it. How will Lucius find his peace? Sorry I haven't reviewed your story lately, even though I've been reading it like an addict, but RL got in the way. I still love your writing though.
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  • From Jan on June 17, 2007
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
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