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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ShilohDarke on June 17, 2007
    Ch 41:

    Wow! I found myself crying as the lightening bolt struck home in Lucius' heart. I could see him realizing every nasty deed he'd ever done. I could feel the pain that choked him and made it hard for him to breathe. His heart was literally breaking and it had to have been the hardest thing he had ever had to do to walk away from the first woman he'd truly come to love.

    A month? Don't get me wrong, I can see him needing more than a night or two to figure out what's now in his heart... But can he stay away from them for that long? I think that Hermione is his light and realized salvation and he'll likely find himself drowning without her.

    This chapter was extremely emotional as well. I love the depth of emotion you poured into it and I know you were probably crying as you wrote it. I salute you and I wait anxiously for the next chapter... (If he stays away a whole month I think Hermione should make him crawl back to the bedroom in a very submissive, docile manner!)

    Please update soon as I don't want to wait long to see what happens next!

    Shiloh
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  • From Pumkin on June 17, 2007
    cruel. so very very cruel. i loved it but don't leave us hanging. update soon please.
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  • From ANON - sara on June 17, 2007
    please write more and why is he leaving shouldnt he be there for his daughter? please write more i think it isan excellent story and i really like it. thank you
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  • From DB1 on June 16, 2007
    @41. awww she had a baby girl thats so sweet. update soon. i don't like that lucius is going away!!!!!

    *DB*
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  • From Sampdoria on June 16, 2007
    A great chapter! I really liked the way you had Lucius react, it was an unexpected twist, but I see that he would not be the husband Hermione wants and the father Chloe needs if he doesn't come to terms with him self, not to mention forgive himself. Very well done!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 16, 2007
    Just a quick review to say keep up the good work and I hope to see an update soon!
    PS: I really like how you're portraying Lucius, good character development. =)
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  • From ANON - jw on June 16, 2007
    ch 41 - whoa, what a roller-coaster.... Thanks for not letting the vampire succeed in his greedy plans; that was a very sneaky and thus very Hermione solution. But boo on Lucius taking the coward's route! I hope Hermione tells Severus, who might be able to put a tracking spell on him or something. Bad father, to leave just when Hermione has post-partum blues to deal with and really needs his help. He better make it up to her when he returns!!
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  • From beigelexus01 on June 16, 2007
    Damn you for leaving a cliff hanger!!....Wonderful chapter! Please update soon and keep up the good work!!
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  • From angelnomiko on June 16, 2007
    wow .. i hope sev can help them out .. please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

    angel
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  • From ladyravenna on June 16, 2007
    Ahhh!! No! Lucius can't leave Hermione for a month....I don't like plot twists that end this way...You better write the next chapter soon, else I don't know what I am going to do...lol
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  • From on June 16, 2007
    OK, he had to deal with it sometime. Hermione truly is a saint though!!! One month... one month with a new baby??? He'd better work his shit out quick! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - lazart on June 16, 2007
    WOW, I didn't expect that!! Poor Hermione!! Loving the story so update soon!
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  • From ANON - 999 on June 16, 2007
    All I can say is wow!!! That was a deeply moving chapter! The way you describe Lucius
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  • From scotsgirl on June 16, 2007
    Brilliant just bloody brilliant loved this chapter
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  • From sirsevchick on June 16, 2007
    Absolutely womderful, you have me hanging on the edge of my seat wondering what is going to happen and when your next update is.
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