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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ladyravenna on May 31, 2007
    Wow you're fast with those chapters. I am totally speechless, I can't think of anything else to say. Just keep on writing.
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  • From ANON - drlincu on May 31, 2007
    I love this story. I am poised on the edge of my chair waiting for updates. Please keep them coming!
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  • From willowgirl on May 31, 2007
    Your story is so good! I get just to happy when I see you have posted a new chapter. My heart just melts for poor Lucius. He seemed so feeled with joy when Hermione told him that they would be chopping down a tree every year as a family. I understand that feeling big time. I think you have a talent for capturing human emotion perfectly. The way you relate how your character are feeling just blows me away.
    Now, I just have to wonder just who those paddles and whips were used on when he use to visit that restaurant? Lucius or his lady of the evening? Yes, yes I know I'm sick.
    Hermione I hate to break it to you, but it looks like your husband has plans for you that may inclued numbing ointment. Good luck girl.
    I'm really wondering what Lucius is giving Hermione for Christmas? I wonder what Lucius would think the perfect gift would be? I think we all know what she whats, but is Lucius ready to give it to her yet? Maybe he will take a chance on love.
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  • From sirsevchick on May 31, 2007
    Loving the story, even though there was no lemons, it was a nice set up for the lemony goodness that I am sure you will be sending us in the future.
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  • From ANON - Michelle on May 31, 2007
    Awww, that's very nice. Christmas as a happy time - involving giving, not just receiving? Such a novel idea. I liked how she interviewed Achilles to be sure she was making his Christmas as happy as she could. Thanks for the update!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on May 31, 2007
    Mr. Roboto? Hmm, not as elegant.

    Marvelous work, as usual. I can't wait to see what Hermione got for Lucius! Also, I do hope Lucius won't find some way to muck the holiday up... Though that would add some entertainment... Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From misslala on May 31, 2007
    I hope Lucius' gift to Hermione is to say he loves her. :)
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  • From ANON - LeahLove on May 31, 2007
    MORE!!!!! I love that song! And I love this story! I want more. Now! Are you going to have a chapter about the baby's birth? Or are you just going to have them suddenly have the kid? I would love to see Lucius' reaction to Hermione in labour! That is all. I love this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Lustblood on May 30, 2007
    Awww.... very nice LaBibliographe. Nice that Hermoine got hers, although I'm sure there will literally be fireworks once the baby is born and they can really get it on. PLEASE be sure to include a chapter on that! LoL... some of us really can never get enough!
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  • From willowgirl on May 30, 2007
    LaBib, please forgive me for using your review page for my plea to 999. Please don't be mad at me and threaten to thrash me with that black vibrator. I know you love her story too and hate to see her stop. Thanks, Willow

    999, I understand how painful a bad review can be. I have been rejected by a publisher on a true life story I was very passionate about. After getting my rejection I relized why I was writing it in the first place. I started writing it for me. Not for some publisher I didn't even know.
    I think I might of read that negative review. Because I was puzzled, what that person was talking about. I think that person must of been confused on what story they were reading in the first place. This is AFF after all! Stories are going to be very sexy. Please don't let this reviewer stop you. You have to know just how gifted you are. Your story is so unique, sexy and funny. Your story always leaves me guessing what is going to happen next. I'm very sad and confused at the pulling of your story. A person with your talent for writing should not only be finishing this story , but should be writing many more. Please reconsider finishing your story, please! We have a long boat trip to take together and I've already stocked up on motion sickness medicine.
    What ever you deside please remember that I think your story is brilliant. I think the last chapter you wrote was your best so far. Please don't change because you think you must please others.
    Love your fan,
    Willow
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  • From on May 30, 2007
    This chapter was so funny, I
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  • From ANON - Elly on May 29, 2007
    Huzzah! I am officially a 'brave new reviewer'! I expect chocolates and ale....aaaany time now. Haha, naw, I'm just kidding. I'm here solely to make you happy by telling you how grand your story is! And guess what! Your story is just grand! I've never been particularly fond of Lucius/Hermione. Hell, I've never been so fond of Lucius. Until 'The Wedding' he was just a slimy git with beautiful feminine locks. But now, he's a buff, gorgeous, silky haired fox with inner waves of termoil that could flood the world! And I would be happy to calm those waves with a few rounds of his kinky, master/'lowly slave' sex (insert girlish fan giggles here).

    Anyway, I'm am anxiously awaiting your next installment and you can be sure you now have brand spanking new rabid story-stalker that will be checking for updates every day and will - most definatly - be leaving her opinions and ideas for each new chapter to come! So, on that happy note, I will take my leave... with your Lucius. (grabs Lucius and runs)

    Love, Elly
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  • From ANON - Fantasy Loremaster on May 29, 2007
    An absolute brilliant story! I love how you are able to capture all of the little nuances of the characters and make them seem so realistic. It is a true pleasure to be able to see them (Hermione/Lucius) grow into what appears to be shaping up to be a love of a lifetime for them. And your smut, dear god, I'm fanning myself, wanting desperately to surprise my husband at work for a nooner. After reading this story, I am humbled and awed that you have been following my own story so far and have been one of my most constant reviewers. I KNOW I am not anywhere in your league of writing, but I have made it my goal to read everyting you have posted so far, because the caliber of your writing ability is amazing! Thank you for sharing your story (stories) with us and I am off to read some more of your work!

    F.L.
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  • From lilbitbord on May 29, 2007
    I like their form of punishment, and I love the song. Lucius seems to be opening his heart little by little each day. Can't wait for more
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  • From Rumpelyssa on May 29, 2007
    Great hot chapter!!!

    Brilliant LaBib!

    I so wish Lucius would tie me up to his bedpost and play Knothole with me... lovely imagery there, and I even saw Jason Isaac's Malfoy, with Kiera Knightley as Hermione in this scene.

    Hmmm... that would be cool.
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