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Reviews for The Wedding - COMPLETE

By : LaBibliographe
  • From ShilohDarke on May 24, 2007
    LMAO and Loving it! My imagination was going wild while I read that chapter! I can just see him spread eagle on the bed and enjoying it so much, then the surprise of the vibrator sent him straight into Lala land! That was just too cute!

    I loved it, I wonder what he'll think when he wakes up and she's gone??? Hmm....

    Waiting eagerly for more!
    Shiloh
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  • From ANON - Jenn on May 24, 2007
    Hey!

    Great - another one and I have my last exam...
    English and German went well...thanks! I hope maths is going to be good as well...!

    Anyway...enough about school...another great chapter...I like the way you depict Lucius and how his feelings towards Hermione slowly change...

    Can't wait for another one!

    xox, Jenn
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  • From lilbitbord on May 24, 2007
    I think my computer just over heated. LOL very hot!!!
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  • From ffpoisongirl on May 24, 2007
    Me again! I was thinking about your story randomly last night, and I realized that while Lucius has been obsessing over Hermione's pregnancy, neither he nor Hermione have made any preparations that I know of for the baby's arrival. Are they going to do some baby shopping? I know they don't know the sex of the baby, so they probably won't get clothes, but toys, diapers and a cradle might come in handy. Just a thought!
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  • From dragon37 on May 24, 2007
    It's really not fair that you get to keep him all to yourself. Oh well, I guess we should be lucky that your writing about him. I'm glad to see that Hermione gets to show some dominence in the relationship. can't wait to read more.
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  • From willowgirl on May 24, 2007
    Oh My Goddess!!!!!!!!! That was so Hot!!!!!!!!
    Hermione I don't think you have to worry about Lucius straying at the end of the year. I don't even think the best hooker in Knockturn Alley could top that preformance. I think if a pregnant witch can make a wizard cum so hard that he passes out she should get a reward. I'm thinking he should at least let her have a pudding after dinner every night. Come on Lucius, maybe just a small one?
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  • From Rumpelyssa on May 24, 2007
    I am one of those conservatives; so I had to skip this chapter. Sorry.

    I did like the line: Superbastard smile! though.
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  • From sheherazade on May 24, 2007
    Something tells me this is going to be a goody...could it be the word 'kinky' in your A/N? Surely I'm not that Pavlovian - but yes, I am. Sigh.

    Lucius is all wet and wild; I like that. And I like this little insight into his psyche: "the stronghold of his artful mind included a dark, remote cavern where all his more unpleasant or uncomfortable guilty feelings were securely locked and buttressed against any stray sentiments of culpability..." etc. That explains for me how Lucius can carry on as if he's never participated in any Death Eater badness; he has repressed this side of himself now that the war is lost.

    I'd like to see his superbastard smile too.

    Ha ha, Hermione takes advantage of his helpless state to lecture him. How funny.

    Wow. Very hot! I need a bucket of water; excuse me.
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  • From ANON - Jess on May 24, 2007
    I started to read your story two days ago and now I just finished your latest chapter.

    I really, really like the story. The plot is great. And I really like the way you express yourself. It makes me feel with the characters.

    I really do hope you are not one of those writers who never finish their stories.

    Greetings, Jess
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  • From Hollypopuk on May 24, 2007
    *drools* Theia is unavailable at the moment, when she manages to pick herself off the floor she will be happy to leave you a message.

    Well wow! The handcuffs - I liked, hehe. Fantastic chapter, as always - my monitor is steaming up, think I need to open a window. Did at first think Lucius was perhaps getting off *cough* a bit lightly but the handcuffs made it oh so interesting. Looking forward to seeing what he makes of Hermiones little monologue!

    Much love and cookies, Theia xxx
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  • From ANON - Janeplay on May 24, 2007
    Gnaw, gnaw gnaw. (That's me gnawing my heart in jealousy.) Keep it up! Good writing and you are slowly changing Lucius' perceptions of himself, aren't you? It's way more fun that way, and I loved his slytherin description of himself! Cookies for you. :)
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  • From ffpoisongirl on May 24, 2007
    Apparently Hermione is a lit more forgiving than I am. If I were upset with not being trusted by my (hypothetical) husband, I wouldn't be so quick to give him one of his favorite types of sex, I don't care how dom I got to be.

    I know it probably gets old, hearing me compare your work to other fanfics I've read, but I really like the way you combined both lemony hotness and fluffy emotion with this. Usually when I read lemons with emotion, they take one of two routes: either putting off all emotion until both parties reach orgasm, or being filled with flowery sentimental tripe that detracts from the hotness of the scene. I don't know how you do it, but somehow you manage to combine the two qualities without either overdoing or excluding either.
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  • From angelnomiko on May 24, 2007
    wow thatwas great .. please more .. later for now

    angel
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  • From misslala on May 23, 2007
    Absolutely incredible! :) Brilliant as always, ;) Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - catysmom on May 23, 2007
    I like it. Please update soon.

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